It has a good and interesting premise, however, the sentence structures need work
character and plot development is intresting and mainly world background is something new along with fresh power system , i hope author updates regularly
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Well, it's a cultivation novel, so I recommend you keep your standards low. If you do, you'll be pleasantly surprised.However, keep your standards up to things like Solo Leveling or The Death Mage Who Doesn't Want a Fourth Time and you might be displeased.Since it's a cultivation novel, pacing is inconsistent, but that's nothing new. Characters are pretty typical, but not to the point of being full on "I'm just here to power level the MC!" stereotypes.Chapters are released often if you read the first 86 and find you want to continue reading. I stopped here as the novel is just not my cup of tea, being a godforsaken cultivation novel, but others might like it.That's it I suppose. Really, I just feel meh about this novel. There was a good, entertaining idea going with the characters, but it fell short. It feels like it's more about the strength and fighting and making money and cultivation than it is about the main characters themselves, but I could just be focusing on those parts more.
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"You mutilated them, you put their heads in their stomachs !?"
"Yesss" shouts JK while running towards me.
"And that's Frisk." Then I pointed to Papyrus and Sans after.
Will he be sect founder? Or a founder of a path of cultivation like a spear cultivator(play off sword cultivator cause I hate swords, so overused) or like a beast cultivator, someone who makes a pact with a beast and use each other to advance. Like beasts have the capability to cultivate slooo***w but store aloooot where as humans cultivate do fast but store alittle making the pact get rid of there weaknesses but keep the strengths that would be cool
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Big Tree panicked and hurriedly put his hand down. "Ah..."
"Uuugh, I guess it's time to wake up, come on Nemo get up." Akito got ready for work while Nemo was waiting for his food to be served. Once Akito was ready he started making dinner while listening to the song on the radio and dancing around at the same time. They both ate their breakfast and relaxed on the couch for a bit, since he had time to spare. After some time passed it was already 7:00 and Akito had to be at work at 7:30 so he had to get going. "Well Nemo looks like I have to go now, make sure you behave while I'm gone" said Akito while he grabbed his camera and put on his shoes. "Bye Nemo