Lonely_Art
I'm really enjoying this book! there are so many turns that I can't put it down!
I really enjoy this and think it will be peak btw you mixed up chapters 38 and 39
I have enjoyed this story. Through the authors words I was able to imagine the development of Tupac . I would recommend if to anyone that wants to read about the authors idea of Tupac's biography. I don't know enough to say what is different from reality. Again, I enjoyed the story. However, i feel like I was brought here with a bait and switch tag "reborn". The main character does not seem to be aware that he is reborn so I don't understand why the tag has been used.
Interesting setup with Oceana's struggles and the tension of being scorned! Maybe expand a bit on her mother's return—what does it mean for Oceana? This could add a great hook!
The saga of a real villain. Something rare on this site of fake villains................................................................................
Few creators manage to deliver such impressive quality right from the start, which speaks volumes about your skill and passion. If you continue honing your craft, there’s no doubt that you’ll achieve great success. Keep going—your potential is undeniable!
Nice work nice work very good of you keep it up
nice story but I am not able to understand
clueless mc about his powers , the mc has a system and his power as you guess from the title is about speed , sometimes the mc forget some of his skills ch(0-63) thats as far i have gone by the time i posted this review but i will keep reading more and more because i like it , i might not be able to edit or forget to do it in the future , love the world building , characters , writing quality , and the story that is currently progressing
Very good so far and unique which I find is the most important in this genre. As long as the MC doesn’t get too ridiculous and a few side characters are given their time to shine and aren’t just trade bots for the story.
im slowing down my upload schedule down to a chapter a week so I can improve the quality of each chapter instead of just mass producing them
here to return your 5 star review on my work that i havent even started since the word count chapter.
