CastlePandaiyt
Quite the novel. Something I found rather pleasing was how well this novel is written. Not in the sense where every sentence is composed of complex vocabulary but because of how well everything is described. It's never boring as the author doesn't create entire paragraphs of details on small things to fill up the chapter with words. Along with that comes the occasional casual dialogue which gives off a sense of relaxation which makes the novel more enjoyable. Very good read!
Only update's stability is 5 stars. The MC got 1,2 million years of cultivation but couldn't use them all at once. Why even bother giving him those at the start then. I simply didn't like it. Also, the disciple's names change here and there in the early chapters, not sure about the later chapters, as by the time I put this, I would have already dropped the novel.Also, Exp
The problem is that you have to wait for the chapters... like there's no new chapter in the last month so you have to wait quite a lot. But the story its good and the MC is not an idiot who dosnt know how to use his brain.
Need more author plzz..........................??????????????By the way the book is awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Just read it fellas!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's a wonderful story and has nice plot. read the former one and it's good and definitely recommend. Keep trying author. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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I honestly have no problems with this.The story line is great and I really like the character plot.
Not sure what they use as a method of choosing these but I've read better SI fanfic's of Harry Potter on this site than 90% of the filth they keep adding on review. Candy crush has more complex gameplay and system than the game here. MC cheat is retarded. Item rarity and stats mean nothing just stuff randomly throw together with author pulling out numbers out of his áss that change between chapters. Combat is = random number, mob uses random skill that does something, mc uses random skill that does something, MC alive because avoiding damage not explained how, cheat activate random normal beginner mob drops 10 items that are perfect upgrade for MC including highest rank skills and weapons because it makes sense tutorial area gives endgame lvl stuff. Oh and almost forgot you buy in-game currency with real money so P2W is included just like all the other Chinese mobile games or clones of one game released in new skin again and again. There's no world building no character progress and overall it feels like a novel written by a 10 year for a school essay. Then again it has the MMORPG in the title so maybe they have like a template where you just write some random names and it generates yet another one of these novel copies with same plot as the rest of them. Now that I think of it its like a clone of China's game market same shít paddled with different name and microtransactions included...
This story is amazing. After reading multiple chapters I can say that the way the author strings together words is top tier. Reading these sentences will make you visualize them with great detail and I believe that is what makes a horror story great. Keep up the great story!
So far so good! Carry on releasing! Can't wait to read more of it!
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