Really nice story till now nice settings and the side characters have a sense of presence.unlike most cultivation novels where the side characters only job is to make noise and serve as a foil to the greatness of the mc. Here every one is their own personWorld background and setting though generic is pretty decent.MC's personality is also a happy-go-lucky-and-I-don't-give-a-damn-about-the-world and likable overallreally liked the story and the first antagonist presented is also decent-ishh(ok he is just a crappy old man)Anyways it's a good novel so check it out.
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Esta novela es divertida e interesante. Realmente reí cuando leí la ultima parte de la sipnosis. Espero que la historia no se arruine mas tarde.This novel is fun and interesting. I really laughed when I read the last part of the synopsis. I hope the story will not be ruined later.
After many twists and turns and trying my hand in different types of genres, I am finally back to where I started everything. This novel, although looks like a light-hearted story about the daily life of a op mc, I can assure you that it isn't. There will be plots, twists, unexpected situations and problems that would make our mc to bang his head on the wall to get a solution. you will see through this novel that, even though you have enough power, there are something in the world where you can't solve it through brute force alone. Have fun guys.
I loved the suspense the author has created in her book....its very well described and the plot is so thickening and author has the ability to catch the readers attention through her writing...good job!
Wow author.... That was amazing. I think you did a great job by mentioning 'you' instead of using any name which made me imagine myself in the MC shoes and you know... I was like... Imagining myself conversing with Mandeep(ofc, that's you to be precise, at least according to me. And even though I don't know you, I just imagined a person in your place and got well into the play). And the other thing is, when I was reading that fungus attack, actually I got such a dream. So in that dream, one of my fathers friend( a scientist) has warned that the whole world will hit a fungus attack which spreads faster and faster in rate and in two days the whole world will be in its control. But, no proofs for his claims and the world marked him as crazy. However, I believed in him and we were making a spacecraft to leave earth and find some other safe place to live. And the fungus I mentioned was something similar like you mentioned. It will ocupy human brains and control humans. However, that fungus was stupid(I have to say) ... So we estimated the attack will be after three months, but our estimations are false. In two months, world got attacked. By God's grace, my scientist uncle already made a spacecraft, well, he made a small spacecraft, which I turned it big using big light(probably I saw lots of doremon stuff that day to get big light in my dream) and then we were ready to leave planet... Well, I think I spoke alot of unnecessary stuff. So coming to the point, that was an awesome book and already recommended few of my friends. Keep up the good work dear author. I am cheering for you. ☺☺☺
This novel is dense with mathematical principles, which at times makes you feel dumb, but also makes you feel inspired, that the natural world is witvin your reach if only you would work for it
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
For a character that have transmigrated so many times, the mc sure doesn't act like it. The mc acts like a child afraid and unsure of everything. With so much experience, I would expect that he'll mostly be apathetic and at least be able to lie proficiently. The character is disappointing. More than 364 transmigrations and he's still sweating while lieing and people can still play him anyhow. Truly disappointing
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