For the first few chapters, I was uncertain if I would like the story. I was afraid 'cause there were so many ways it could turn out bad... the pucker factor was pretty high... luckily the storyline smoothly avoided the pitfalls other authors seem to routinely fall into and I actually fell in love with all the characters... it's now one of my favorite comedies
It is a really good story and it had me on hook all the time it is also an interesting plot it has many things that you will not expect the characters are also really well spoken for
FINALLY we have a good novel with PLOT from this author...this novel has a well balanced scenes of fighting & r-18 & romance & cultivation...Its also about a reincarnated of great sword master who will do anything to become stronger so no one can bully or look down on him...Mc still is acting immature and not thinking with his brain but his lower body sometimes ...And considering this author is already writing 3 novels at once, the release rate of this novel is good.But recently i feel author is trying to put this novel on drama route...But in my opinion it's a well written novel which has worth spending time over it.
This novel starts very well. The plot is interesting and the MC is sa real robber. But after the novel begin to be like... big ****.... *sigh* this numbers are just... too much... I know that they can live a long time and get a lot of time to copulate... But please respect urself and the others... I hope Wu Qi will not fall in this kind of depravaty.... I'm quite sad because I really love this story. The beginning was really good and now the story still lacking a bit. Don't forget the MC is a thief, but he didn't enjoy the troubled times of the war to steal something? Even if he is a commander... The only things he gets it's fish-scales and he even didn't rob them... Irecommend this novel only for the beginning I'm hoping that this novel will gets good change by the time...
the title says it, not lame. it's not a normal slice of life either. it's kind of a new horror story with some elements from sdt. overall good.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Why didnt beel appear in this chapter?Also its nice but getting the pov of the rapist hell nah also the second chap was f**ked up but i kinda liked it cuz the mc got revenge
An intresting premise on the reset trope. Instead of reverting to the start of one's life, the MC only resets his job, while also gaining a new one. It is certainly fresh and gives one greater interest to read.Then there are the skills that are well thought out and flow well with the combat.Hoping to see more, as the book gains more chapters.
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Writing Quality is 4.3/5 from me since the way the author describes things were easy to understand and wouldn't be much problem unless you're such a picky grammar reader.The update's stability is five, considering how the author able to update many chapters on the same day. Looking at the way the story goes fairly smoothly and logically without any hint of awkward development, I guess 4.7 is not a bad rate for the story development. Here's the unique. The MC was a gambler, but unlike any other gambler, he is surprisingly the opposite of a bad gambler, a good gambler with family being the centre of his life. He was bold enough to leave his job/hobby as a gambler to make his family's relationship goes well.The MC's wife also quite mischievous and tend to prank MC and her son. There is this moment where the MC's wife also broke out in tears upon knowing the MC's source of money was entirely came from gambling. This shows how MC's wife is another human being and not an expressionless robot, unlike in some novels.The MC's son was designed like a child of his age. Full of curiosity, childish, and reckless.The author has described the world background perfectly at the start of the novel. Hence, 5 stars from me <3
Read all the trial chapters(till 60). Although it got boring in the beginning of the novel it turned out to be surprisingly good in the end. Ahhhh! Why did they have to stop just when it was getting to the good stuff? I really hope this gets picked.
At first i didn't want to read this due to the bad reviews but i figure ill give it a shot and see how the first 100 chapters go and i have to say those people that gave this novel a bad review are either retarded or stupid. Infact i gave this novel a way higher review than the mmorpg guardian. Which is a very similar novel. Ok the base is WoW but was it a straight copy paste hell no. Sure the intro was weak as hell but the MC never lost sight of the whole reason for his exiatance. The novel manage to keep on topic despite the game info. And the way the game info was used was really good too. So much so that i feel they should submit this to WoW and get it officially published. Anyways 5 star very worth the read. Refreshing to read a book based on a game i played for a few years. Thanks bought back some really fond memories of the game for me.