so far the story is really good and I'm glad I found it here and the amount of chapters is little so I ask the author for more.
the world, the story and the characters are really good and consistent and I can't wait for more from the future chapters so please hurry author
Great novel Highly recommend one of best trial read this time
Very entertaining
The plot is great
Everything is cool till 40 chapters and i would really like this to be picked
Wouldn't want such a gem to get hidden
Have they become so shameless now that they're using the same cover on two novels of the same batch?
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So far, I gotta say it started off quite well. I mean I didn't get borde within the beginning chapters, but instead became more intrigued as the plot progressed.
everything else is also good. There are rarely if not any grammar mistakes or misspelled words and even if there are the author is quick to fix them if you point them out, which is a point in my book.
It shows the dedication and passion of the author since he's willing to quick fix any mistake pointed out to him, unlike some other authors who just ignore it or say when I do a rewrite.
Over all I rate this book a 5/5 so far. But if it goes downhill later on then I'll retrack my 5 star rating and reassigne a different rating of it then.
Great story just like the game following the same story and the same style however problem is that M.C doesnt have a name i dont know if this was on purpose or a accident and you rolled with it howAever this is really great i expect a lot of great things in youre next stories
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Very interesting so far. I like the video game aspect of the story. However, i am not sure if the world is a game or a real-world with game ability. Maybe it will be shown later.
good novel good characters love everything kinda stupid mc ??[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Mc is your average japanese pushover beta cuck (literally gets cucked 1st chapter) character, stutters nonstop and even the sound of a woman speaking on the radio would make him blush, just the worst kind of mc you can ever get.
I'll say that the story has potential, Villains are interesting and MC's OP, One thing i would suggest author is to balance the story as currently (at the time of writing this review) it's just dark and for fellow readers just give it a try, you will like it and even if you don't like it, don't worry, you can forc- i mean persuade author to improve it by giving them suggestions on their discord.PS: There, you can bully them too
There really isn't much to say about this novel, if you've been reading TLed Eastern Fantasy novel's for a respectable amount of time you've probably read quite a few novels like this. This doesn't try to do anything unique with the tropes, no gimmick, just a safe, generic predictable, plot I could guess in my sleep. Perhaps this could be slightly interesting to someone completely new to the whole disciple multiplication trope but otherwise this really isn't worth your time, I could describe this novel in one word: Pedestrian. Despite this, I'll be generous and give this novel a passing grade (referring to the hollow "5 stars" above, not my actual score at the end of the review) since recently, the standards on Webnovel have somehow managed to fall further and again this could be alright to a newbie or just someone who isn't tired of stuff like this.This'd get a higher score if I wasn't tired of it but this is as generous as I can get. 1.5/5.