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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
A new world and virtual reality! Seems like a great combo. Being a fan of videogames, I can easily say you've caught my attention. I liked the start of the story, and the writing style, and I will definitely check the rest of the story. Keep up!
This book is actually very fun to read, and the writing isn't bad by any means compared to other books I've read on this site, great MC, he just doesn't care about anyone and that's something I always love when reading a book that has a assassin as the mc other books honestly do this terribly, like out of nowhere the mc just lets girls and kids run amok in his life after one event.
Keep going brother this is great shit
**. shame i dont see comments on the chapters this is a great find hope it picks up more traction
Keep continue this story bruh, that suuuuupeeeerr interesting. Can't wait for another part. It's a nice story
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I can't find it in the trial section anymore ,is it dropped?
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Absolutely amazing novel. The characters are more fleshed out than many other novels on this site, and the grammer and readability are phenomenal. I wouldn't say this is the best novel ever, but its a great read, and although there are some cliche's, they are handled pretty well that you don't feel upset when they appear.
I absolutely loved the story so far (ch 32), and look forward to reading more chapters in the future.
The MC, while not the smartest cookie, uses his past knowledge semi-wisely and works for his success. He also realizes the mistakes he made in the past and has pretty good character development.
I would definitly reccomend this to anyone interested in the following genre's:
Action, Virtual Reality, Romance, Harem, Reincarnation/Do-Over, Fantasy, Martial Arts, Etc... (story just started, so can't say much)
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Oh god. This novel is freaking awesome.
The chapters are nicely named, the prologue, even though it was an info-dump, was written so well that it didn't feel like that at all.
The writing quality is superb, and I loved how everything created a sense of tension, from the first chapter.
The only things I'd suggest to change are the words "A few years from now". Usually, these words aren't used for describing something that is already happening (in the story timeline, the future is the present), so perhaps change it to something like "In the year 20XX". Just a suggestion, though.
Otherwise, great work!