Nirtak_Kempfer
Why choose this novel??
The author is going hiatus
And the update is absolutely unstable
And why i give 5* ? It's supposed to be 3 stars
The adventures are boring, the setting is similar to Monster Paradise and Super God Gene
Btw before you Sun of The Beach said i give review before i read, let me tell you, i always read the free trial on original web before voting
Gets you hooked for awhile then decides to pull a super gene BS stunt, now you can only read the new chapters using SS >:(
But it’s even worse than super gene, because the ss required to unlock chapters are doubled or does not go below 12 ss
If I were you, move on and start reading another book
I've been reading this over and over i can't get enough of it.
This isekai LN is the best....SASUGA!......AINZ-SAMA!!!!!!.......Ahhhh..........
Is there a way for you to Post more than once a week because this fan fic is to good
it feels like it's forced the plot omg it's so bad
Your writing is beautiful…
I look forward to your writing...
I wish I could write like you...
You write how I feel, even if I can’t express it...
Your writing inspires me...
I falling in love with your novel.
I hope can read it every time, everywhere...
I hope you writing this novel to the end...
Good job and thank you for your hard working to finishing all chapter.........
This is a diamond in the ruff.
Fuck why do they have to do this to us 140 characters
The way the author forces in flash back in basically every chapter is seriously annoying. It just breaks the flow of the whole story and makes it all seem awkward just to dump in info, and sometimes the info is useless. I rather you make a few chapters at the start to do the info dumping, and provide the background of the world than forcing bits and peices of it everywhere. In general, the plot is progressing slowly, with some bs here and there but its ok if you want to pass time
So far, this novel is very interesting and entertaining to read. This novel is also very unique since the MC is reborn in the body of a failure in life(gambler/smoker/drunkard) who already has a family(beautiful wife and daughter). Which also has virtual reality game elements in it. Therefore, recommend people to read this who like this sort of stuff.(reincarnation/weak-strong/poor-rich/virtual reality/?harem???) Only noticible defect is writing quality, which isn't so terrible , but not totally amazing. I rate it at about 7.5-8.5/10.(depending on reader standards.
I love the character development, their background stories and their future goals explained in detail and grace. I also really like the awesome world building! It’s a great story which I recommend to everyone and I would say you’ll know if you like it if you read up to chapter 33. To the author, thank you for this masterpiece and hope that you’ll continue this story! One question tho, how many chapters do you think this story is going to be?
Amazing stories!!It would be good if no romance in it
Aaaah I got attached to the characters too quickly I can't believe I finished reading it. It was a nice read, it would have been awesome if it was longer but at least the ending was satisfying. The characters are really lovely and likable. Some chapters were funny, some were sad but that was what made everything better, the thoughts and interactions between James and Koz made the story more realistic than I expected it to be. Overall I think this is very well-written, definitely worth a read.
