KiritoAsuna0279
Shameless author promoting my work.If you can get past my not so perfect English, and the fact that is the first time writing a novel, I hope you'll enjoy the world I'm creating born from countless nights without sleep ahah...Love to y'all
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Tooo fluffy~~~~~ Cute male leads. Cute couple. Love the arguments and bickering. But the developmemt of story slightly slow. Hope more frequent update.
I'm not going to lie to you — I sat in my car after reading this chapter and just cried. Like, full-on ugly cry. The kind where you don't even hear yourself making noise, you just sit there and let it happen. It was the kitchen scene. You know the one. She's making him breakfast. Not because she wants to please him — but because it's the last thing she'll ever do for him. And he's sitting there, eating her food, and he has no idea that this is the beginning of the end. The author writes it so simply. So quietly. There's no dramatic music, no internal monologue about how she's about to shatter his world. Just a woman making eggs, and a man eating them, and the terrible, terrible knowledge that one of them knows something the other doesn't. "I'm making you breakfast," she says. And he says, "You don't need to do that." And she says, "I know." That's it. That's the line that destroyed me. "I know." She knows this is the last time she'll ever cook for him. She knows this is the last time she'll ever take care of him in any small, domestic way. And she's doing it anyway, because that's who she is — even when it kills her, she takes care of the people she loves. And then later, when she tells him about the divorce, and he asks why, and she says "because I finally understand who you are" — I literally put the book down and couldn't pick it back up for ten minutes. Not because it was too sad. But because it was too true. Because sometimes the people who hurt us the most are the ones we love the most. And sometimes the only way to save yourself is to let go of the person you've been holding onto your whole life. This book doesn't just make you feel things. It makes you feel things you didn't know you were capable of feeling.
School is really stressful takes me time to calm down and write a chapter, please bear with me guys.New chapters are coming prepare for more drama, comedy and a little bit of sci fi
A good novel for christmas ! I recommend it greatly if you like this genre you will not be disapointed.Don't hesitate to read this it fast and easy to read with good quality overall !
Ano ano ba ipapaprint saanunsyo ilan ba yung teacher and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there
Really good, has some good misterys to it. Has a very high potential depending on how the auther reads. And its definetly atleast to where i have read above average. The only problem being the update rate.
HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here.The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d?. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review.And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stone or send coffee gifts.I leave it here if you wanted to rant at me:Discord: @CloudSky#4375 BIG THANKS FOR READING!!
I want more of this novel Some translation issurs but pretty minir and things ive seen before Hopefully this gEts picked up 140 is way too much
Everything about this story is good even excellent imo besides two things:Grammar mistakes, like misusing he/she/her/his/prince/princes/princes/princesses/should/could/would. Pacing is slow at certain parts of the story but in general it's fine.Besides that the plot, the character design, the characters' interactions, the drama and the ability to make the reader emotional towards the MC are top-notch.This novel has amazing potential, a hidden gem only if you can ignore those two cons I urge you to read the story otherwise you are going to be frustrated. To the author please fix those mistakes because this story is a gem but unfortunately, most readers won't bear with the grammar mistakes and will drop the novel before realizing the plot is extremely good. Good luck and I hope you the best!
The book was really well written! The mc having no morals also works really well with his background!I also love the sheer brutality in this book!I hope to see where this story goes!
