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i love it.. the story' is stable but not boring.. easy to understand and easy to make me jelouse with main characters.. so invisible like the theme..
Can u tell to all the Author, please stop creating a story that MC enemies won’t be dead within 500 chapters? it’s annoying, story of outside the earth… can’t you make a million of enemies instead of 1 enemy and then MC cannot even kill? imagine 500 chapters and 1 enemy?
Pretty good story. Definitely better than some of the novels with more fame on this site. Hidden gem. The writing is quite good and the plot is nice and consistent. Check it out.
It begins alright. the first few chapter start explaini.HE IS GETTING BLACKMAILED. BY A GIRL, WITH NO RELATION TO HIM WHATSOEVER, BECAUS HER MONKEY LIKES HIM. SHE THREATENS TO TELL HER FRIENDS. HE GIVES IN????? HE ACTUALLY GIVES IN, AND IS BASICALLY HER SERVANT LIKE WTF NO. very poor character development and the cliches are unbearable. Cultivation system changes constantly, he wasnt that strong at all in his previous life. he was supposed to be top tier, but he nows bumps into stronger people all the time. And very strong was supposed to be about 5th level, but he bumps in the first chapters in the girl thats blackmailing him, where her bets are basically lvl 9 pills, and treats them as common stuff. Recycling old novel stuff. not worth it. dont read,
Yoooooo. Snail in the house. Wait a sec..... USE SOME OF THE TIME U PUT IN HERE TO RELEASE A NEW CHAPTER FOR THE TALES OF GODS AND DEMONS. UR TORTURING US WITH THE WAIT. U LITERALLY LEFT THE STOTY AT A CLIFFHANGER DUDE. I LIKE IT SO MUCH ITS THE 8TH TIME IM REDING IT IN THE LAST 2 MNTHS. Come on bro release a chapter yo.Whatever ur books are still lit ??Keep up the chapter release rate AND RELEASE A CHAPTER FOR TDG ???
DROPPED ! ! !The author dropped the novel - it's better not to read than to suffer the agony of unsolved mysteries. Very disappointed. It should be marked as 'Dropped' rather than 'Completed' in the novel status.
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I have not read to much (about 20ish chapters), and the book seems to be good. The world is an interesting idea and deviation from regular system reincarnated or transmigration books, but still has recognizable similarities. Might be a book to look out for when your finished your other preferred novels.
Hi guys, this is the very first chapter, and I would like to make some things clear.1- There will be romance? Well, a little, but I'm not a romanticist. Hence, this will take place 'SUPER FU***NG LATE' in the story. So don't worry about Feifei for now. She isn't the main point here, Krune's life as a wisp is.2- If you haven't noticed the spaceship yet, you better know that this is a novel where technology exists. Still, it is mostly used for convenience. It takes almost no part in the cultivators' strength, so don't expect super mechas or spiritual armors or whatever. Think about this universe as if our nowadays technology meets the ancient cultivation world and they just get well together. It also helps to create a lot of funny events, so...3- The first 20 chapters or so doesn't picture it well. Still, like a wisp, Krune only has the little knowledge that he learned in the forest and by secretly visiting the nearby villages. He knows about the technological world but had barely involved himself with it before leaving the Katiu Forest.4- As a nonhuman, Krune has no EQ when considering the humans' culture and habits. It is definitely one of the top trends of this novel, so you can expect a lot of 'smashing my face against the common sense wall' after chapter 20 more or less.5- Will there be harem in this novel? No, there won't be any, be it Krune or any other character in the entire story.'Sorry, Mario, but your princess is in another castle.'I'm the type of person that can't accept a world where a man having several wives is okay. Still, a woman having more than one man is considered a betrayal, this is BS! I have no problem with novels where both genres have the same rights, though.6-The book is now passing through a re-edition. The story won't change anywhere, just the grammar will be fixed. You will notice that the grammar will turn bad at some point, and then it will come back to normal after chapter 100. Thanks to my editor for all the work on the existing chapters so far. o/
Among all novels I read here in Qidian this the MOST BAD. I don't know why you put make that kind of story line. This story line was insulted to all women.
overall I love the whole store owner troupe and plot base but the authors lack of writing skills leave it a dry read with no real depth it reads like a text book completely monotone with only blips or random cliche plot points heck I just read the first fight scene and it literally goes he uses basic saber technique and attacks with all his strength he injured 2 and one managed to defend knowing hes the strongest one he attacks again with all his strength and manages to behead him other bandit "how dare you kill my brother " he attacks again and manages to kill both i mean that's not even trying it's one thing if your trying to learn to write and all but who charges for the garbage
