You've beautifully expressed your thoughts
Normally i don't review as if i do it's either long winded or oddly short so today, it'll be memey, is good yes? ( yes it's very good you should read it )
Honest reviews are here.. This novel is not good, but I can't say it is bad either.. This is not reincarnation or transmigrated MC.. This novel is about the MC, which is a prince of an empire who has not awaken any mana in his body.. Because of that, MC has been exiled by his own father and treated as garbage by whole country.. Later, MC awakens with help from "Nephilim Spirit," which changes his race, guiding and teaching him aether (better version of mana in this novel) and nether body, teach him alchemy and many other knowledge of the past..That Spirit has a VERY VERY annoying character.. Seriously.. Well, the author is the one who created the character like that.. I kinda hate the way the author wrote such as, MC is not strong, super slow growth MC, many unexplained mysteries, there to many slice of life scene (80% of this novel) than fighting/training scene, slow chapter update, and lastly, many skip scene.. 1. Many skip scenes■Let me give an example of what I mean by many skip scenes.. Let's say you watch Detective conan anime.. Mostly, detective conan is divided by two episodes for MC solve the case.. Imagine you watch 1st episode and then the case end.. You thought that the case would continue on the next episode, but it actually is not.. Because on the next episode or any further ahead, there are no cases related to that.. You feel like, "Seriously, what happened to that case??" Yes, there are many these types of scenes in this novel..2. Weak and slow growth■I had caught up with the latest chapters.. For me, the MC growth is quite slow.. Tooooo slow.. The author did try to brainwash his reader by keep saying in this novel how fast the MC growth and how strong MC is.. But it is not.. ■The growth is too slow for me.. The author also says that MC is super hardworking, but to me, the MC barely increases his stat throughout his training.. There are many arguable facts for this novel.. For example, Aether is supposed to be a better version of Mana, like ways better than pure Mana, and we won't see any advantages of it.. We can see the advantage of nether body thru MC stat and compared them to other people stat which MC as 1st circle warrior stat are at same level as 3rd circle warrior stat.. ■But the author keeps showing that MC can't win any fight against 2nd circle.. The author even writes thru MC's word, "That 2nd circle guys can defeat me in 99 different ways even when I fight him with all my strength." Even though MC is at 1st circle, his stat is at 3rd circle, but he can't beat 2nd circle if that person uses his mana. Dude, MC has Aether, and that thing is supposed to be wayyyyys powerful than mana.. It is the same as MC affinities. He has an affinity for time, space, life, and death, but he is not using them during fight.. You can say that this author is not a good writing a fighting novel because most of this novel is like the "MC slice of life" type of novel..3. Unexplained mysteries ■The author also loves to add mysteries it many situations.. For example, the author wrote about "the letter" and kept talking about it without mentioning what "that" is.. There are also situations where MC talks with his master about "that power" and talking about it when we dunno what he actually means.. ■The author justified it by saying, "MC is too weak to know or it useless to know. It is just a burden, if you know.." Yes, unfortunately, there are many more similar situations where the author keeps saying "that" without explaining what he meant.. There is also a scene that suddenly, the author ends it just like that.. Like the scene when MC died, no scene what happened in his family situations.. Like how they react, his father, or his mother, or someone who hate MC or his twin sister who adore him.. That is it, no update related to them at all..This is not OP novel YET.. Maybe this is the author 1st fighting novel, so there are a lot of things he needs to improve.. I hope he gets better in writing.. I will come and read again when this novel reaches his endings.. But seeing this novel barely updated, I'm not sure if I am still alive when that time comes..
I'm at 112 chapters, the current update as of right now, and I am enjoying this novel. I have not seen this power system since Long Live Summons, and it's a system I truly enjoy. the MC's actions make sense to me so far, and the sign in system has so far stayed in its assigned lane. I look forward to reading this as it updates in the future, and I think more people should give it a read.
To be honest, This is a nice book and even though I'm not into Mafia, it's still a good read. Patiently waiting for more chaps.
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A great high fantasy story. Written in actual english. Main characters are funny and interesting. Unique lores and factions keep the story dynamic and fun.
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I have not started the story yet, but the name and concept is so good I will give it a nice placeholder review till I get too the current chapter...Combat Maids FTW!
Something wrong in 100+ chapters, I thought this is about rune but now about beast, I thought he can level up his rune even some of them are gold grade. So what the heck is happening?Maybe the title was wrong it should be.Shock! I can talk to beast in english? ?? The runes are his specialty but he ignore it haha.. He is clinging to became a beastmaster not rune master.? Maybe I'm wrong but I think the plot turned left to original story.
Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.
Reviewing at around chapter 275:
I have conflicted feeling about this.
the beginning was not too good in my opinion because the author went the extra mile with the drawbacks on the mc, imposing 4~5 handicaps.
Then it turned out to be great with many things addressed and an excellent pace until around the mid hundred chapters, I was surprised by how good this turned out to be and was enjoying the story A LOT. afterwards I feel like it went downhill after the tournament arc. it's moving at a snail pace where there was no progress with the mc character for a hundred chapters (think about it, mc moved from lvl 0 to lvl 42 in less than 200 chapters then suddenly you have to grind a hundred chapters, one third of the story, where the mc lvl stagnates. To me that's killing the story with bad pace and not enjoyable one bit).
Now to be fair, the story is about "kingdom building" since the title is about the base he is growing, so I would not complain that a lot of story time is spent on growing his forces, but the contrast in the pacing was too obvious. spending hundreds of chapters in events that take few months of story time is a mistake to me, especially when those events are not Central to plot AND the story is in early stages.
I will probably come back to this afterwards but I am dreading the grind if the plot slows down as much as it did between lvl 42 to lvl 43.