Although im not a hig fan of the plot i still enjoyed the first few chaps but sadly i found a better novel so im going to leave the novel for when its complete
This has potential, I love the plot, the characters, the scenes. I hope there will be more adversary as well as friends who will join the mc on his journey.
I strongly recommend this novel, if you are interested in intelligent plots regarding military strategies. It is not exaggerated as in records of the human emperor and compared to that novel it shows more of a xianxia element. This novel might be slow sometimes and there are a few draggy chapters, but overall a great novel. Don't bother with other people, most importantly this novel is worth giving a try. Only problem I have found so far is the irregular updates. Sometimes two weeks without nothing, but then a mass release to compensate. I hope this novel will see its end.
I'm not sure what direction this novel is heading in, this is a peculiar read. The whole gimmick with this novel is despite being very generic it has a gimmick. There are system notifications for ever minor thing the protagonist does and these system notifications come with points that automatically strengthen the protagonists realm regardless of his will. The protagonist doesn't like this because his father, the emperor is a crazy jealous person and if he finds out, our protagonist is toast. A large portion of the words in this novel are just system notifications which makes this novel feel weirdly shorter than it is, it feels like gimmicky word count filler.This novel doesn't really have much going for it apart from it's bizarreness, there isn't anything about it that still feels new after the first 5 or so chapters. There isn't enough depth to it for it to be very interesting so I'm rather lukewarm on this one. 2/5.
Still waiting for this book to be selected. Even though that's not in the trail section anymore. ?I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT MORE AND MORE BOOKS FROM THE TRAIL SECTION ARE BEING FORGOTTEN ?
Too drawn out, things worth 3 paragraphs at most end up taking close to 5 chapters insteadAnnoying ass characters even for a cultivation novelNot worth readingLack of development in all places
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Clickbait cover.. -.- i thought MC IS fvking handsome but in the story he is just average. All the system do is make him stronger!! Always strength. Haixt dissapointing.?? why does some people like fvking average face mc that want to become a celebrity?? and you just copy this idea from IRAS. that shitty novel full of nonsense.comedian celebrity!! HE doesnt even deserve to become celebrity
This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this. But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw. Please like this so people can see this first.
At first the writing quality is not very good but it's gets clearer and better as the chapters go by. The story is also very good.Keep up the good work author.
The grammar is so bad it's giving me a headache so I'm stopping here. I like the concept and it may have become one of me faves but the grammar and lack of care from the author to even try and fix it is killing it for me. It's one thing to spell a word wrong or to use the incorrect time but having missing words or phrases on top of all that just makes the sentences so annoying to decifer, that even my correct- as-I- read brain cannot keep up. That just means the writer didn't make an effort to even read the chapters a second time. Not being a native English speaker or having it as a second language is not an excuse for lasiness.
Alternate synopsis: "I admired the full moon atop Forbidden City and drank wine at Dongting.Wanderer of Jianghu who does not know my fame, a flying sword can behead with ease."Oh, I butchered the poem, man I suck!Anyway, this is the kind of novel that is really popular in China, but whose popularity here depends upon the translator.The novel is rooted in Chinese myths and legends, and unfortunately most of the novels here with that have a subpar translation. The MC is really intelligent from what I've heard. The novel is certainly a great work, but if the translator doesn't spruce up, we'll get a butchered version. That would be a disservice to the author of this fine work. Something mediocre with a good translation would be better than this fine novel getting a bad TL.By the way, the setting for this novel is around the same as Seeking the Flying Sword Path. If the two translators could collaborate then it would be really great.