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Well what can I say at ch. 140 I had this at a 4/5 now at ch. 250 it's only 3/5. The main reasons why I downgraded it is because the action scenes are either completely skipped or feel more like summaries. 50% of the last 100 chapters are about the mc selling and reselling things which just gets boring and repetitive over time. And the Mc is just altogether very lazy because the system gives him like 99% of things. But it's still good if you just want something to read while waiting for the chapters of your favourite novel. And I know that the lackluster fight scenes are probably because the author is maybe just not so experienced in writing them and that's understandable but what's not understandable is that he doesn't even try to write them and just skipping them.
The story line was great as always and the choice of words too it really makes a great pass time story and it is getting really interesting so keep it up
Idk bro i like it xD but it’s my story soo.... jk, hope u guys enjoy. This has taken years for me to construct. It’s been uploaded on Wattpad for the longest time. I hope this new app will expose an even bigger audience to my work.
It is perfect and hidden piece of gem.... Tho the only caveat is the fact that every person he meets is another genius.Also MC is a bit too forgiving, gets punished for something he did not do but forgives them not to forward his personnel motives but cause of a little girl who could not even speak to defend him..... You can't just be altruistic always, but must give a read to it.
The world background is explained so we'll. While the story development is pretty superb, the plot was already set after 3 chapters or so. I haven't seen much of the characters aside from the mc and the girl who was making a coverWhat a cool and refreshing concept. I'll save my complete review when there are more chapters. Good luck!
At the time of writing this review, only 11 chapters have been posted. But when you get to read them, you suddenly feel wanting more and more. The story is nice, the grammar is to the point and the conversations are engaging... I hope there are more chapters going forward.
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How great is this book! I truly enjoy fanfiction and this one is really great! underrated book that need a lot of attention. great job author, highly recommended.
o really like the story the update is a bit of problem but other than that this is good and worth reading. i hope he just doesn't drop it tho.
I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes.Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.