BertusSwanevelder
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
4.4Very high potential.Translation is iffy at times.Hopefully, more updates.Story isn’t school BS or 1v1 background duels, arrogant bxstards aren’t trying to kill in public as pro assasins used, while dudes robbing and tryin to survive.Characters can reason and negotiate without holding death grudges. Have their backgrounds shape their personality but not define it.World is good.
This novel's good, I miss these types of novel that even if the mc's slacking off, he can also try working hard to gain more. This also have a similarity with shadow hacks but overall it's good and well-written.Don't drop this novel, I'll support it with my power stone on daily basis.
This is the current live version of the book. please read here. The other locations will not update with the new chapters. Chapters will come out M-F, based of US time zones. Bonus chapters will drop for reaching goals.
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I personally love the the characters they are well fleshed out and we'll thought. While the world building is pretty amazing the author gives us just enough information to be interested but not enough to answer all mysteries. So I highly recommend giving this underrated story a try
can't reccomended. the writing is amazing, the story is exceptional. it has an enormous amount of potential. and i want desperately to read more, and i want desperately to reccomend it. but it's been 5 months now since it was updated. i invested money into coins and read daily to keep up, hanging on to every word, only for the the author to stop posting, at first unstable posting, on and off, and then just permanently off. i can't reccomend because you'll get addicted, and then be left hanging.
The story is decent but the terrible grammar just takes away everything it had to offer. Even basic things like names are forgotten from one sentence to the other, almost no sentence is grammatically correct. It's insane how people give this story 4+ stars for writing quality...I have the feeling, that the author doesn't want to edit his chapters or he doesn't realise, that this looks like a soup of letters.
I am the bone of my XP Grinding is my body Spamming is my blood I have written countless messages Unknown to Trolls Nor known to Mods Have withstood countless aching joints but my fingers just can't stop ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) So as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!!
Best book ever???????????????????????????????
What a great starting..creation of enthusiasm for the story is the real success for the writer..Go ahead gem..!!❤️Anxiously waiting for the whole story.. dialogue r on point and the end of this chapter made me wait for the next chapter badly..upload soon, can't wait ...!
A very well made story with strong basis that look like a superhero back story.The story doesn't stop on one part for 10 million years snd gets right to the point.Good story :]
