The way the westerners are portrayed here always cracks me up lol. The MC's western ethnic sister-in-law is made to be a complete sloot. Bro she be carryin' around condoms just to do it with anyone she likes, admitting it Infront of everyone. That was nothing compared to when the narrator/MC agrees on the western culture being just like that and calling them out to be "open".I was at the time like "fr bro?" and ready to change my views of everyone around me. Sheesh what did I get myself into reading this bulshido when reading this at 16 and find it pretty good ?
This the most hidden gem of all. One of my favorite novel ive ever read. 98% of plot and 2% of romance. The author really put so much effort in this novel to make it masterpiece. The downside is that im having hard time to comprehend some games or arc that the mc playing but most of it is understandable and very enjoyable. Like every chapter is really thrilling and super hype. I enjoy every moment ive read about this... Now that im finish reading this one i suddenly feel empty... Im looking for new novel where i feel thrilled, so far im currently reading LOTM in my leisure time.
In my opinion, this story is very good.. but in some parts, there are mistakes in the writing. Maybe I understand because you are just learning to write, and for the character design there are no illustrations but Judging from the description of some of the characters, it's quite interesting... the downside is the character illustrations, but stay enthusiastic!
The story in itself was well place.It left it reader with something to look forward to with each chapter.
One of the best fanfic of naruto I've ever seen. It's really awesome but bro you should upload chapters everyday and I've joined your patreon too. Hope this novel would be a long journey?
Keep it up author?
I guess it might be time to put this book in hiatus mode!
It shows completed 857 but chapters shows 860 which is completed??????
True it should be completed because storyline pulled too long and start getting boring
Was the book on Alpha Hunter ever released?
Amazing story, well written with an intriguing story line and loveable characters. Well don author!
Oh! I thought it was me, thought I had went CRAZY!!! What an ending!! So many unanswered questions: Who was Penny’s biological parents? What happened between Caspian and his alter ego? Who was Penny’s assistant sleeping with, did she end up getting married? So many unanswered questions?
good read and great start to a series
Loved this book. They should had at least 1 more kid. Lol