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Wow 3 of novels I put in library have been picked for trial read that's new just hope there as good as I think. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrreeeeeeeeeeerxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xpppppppppppppppppppp
was pretty good at the beginning then went downhill, the MC became stupidly arrogant, there were a lot of plot holes and the translator cut out some parts.
I enjoyed reading your story, even though I normally don’t go for this genre. If i may make the suggestion; perhaps try to elaborate more about each character? I think I would be able to feel even more for them. I get a good feeling from it and hope you will continue, I plan on checking out your other work as well.
Quit while your ahead the dialog in this is horrible. Its like reading a chat log for example,Char A says "..." Char B "...." Add that onto the fact that the entire premisis of the novel is some S&M fans fap fantasy its not worth the loss of brain cells.
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You got yourself a good story going and l really like it how it is going on in the story l hope you keep going and it’s really good it’s something different l am seeing on here
It's a very good book but I didn't read it I'm sorry you did all of that work but it just didn't interest me but I hope I speck for most people who read this that it is a very good novel
This story is great. Why hasn't it been picked yet? The main character isn't stupid. The plot is excellent. There may be a little plagiarism in plot but not in substance. Lots of time jumps though. By chapter 60 we are over 300 years into the 500 so I want to know what happens next. Can the powers that be pick this story please.
Why did the updates stop??Anyway the book is great while some arcs last a bit 2 long it is still enjoyable . The characters are interesting and the world doesn’t revolve around the Main char
Story Development 0/5*SPOILERS*. MC playing a game to get money cause he eats a lot and his wife needs a second job to feed his lazy ass. Character Design 0/5Author can't utilize his characters, keeps making empty characters that have no purpose. All antagonist characters are the casual trash talking for no reason character that you see in every bad novel.Idiot genius and overly powerful MC who trains his martial arts (he is already at the top there is no training in this novel). If he wasn't constantly saying that he is a martial artist we wouldn't be able to see it for ourselves, he can't remain calm and he always fight to short his troubles.World Building 0/5Too many inconsistencies. Author states on thing and he immediately changes his mind.Some examples:1) Author says in chapter 17 that since players were around level 10, MC has an area that spawns mobs over level 20 as his "personal playground" because no parties would go and farm there. In the same chapter we see a group of 16 looking to hunt a 45 level Boss at the spot MC was farming.2) He has a whole chapter (ch7) on some guys wanted to rob the MC. Author states that in REBIRTH players upon death wouldn't lose experience points but only their equipment. In the whole chapter author gives us the feeling that if MC dies he would have his items + gold stolen.Later on we see that even if someone dies he wouldn't lose items necessary (ch19) . Further into the story, we see a "friend" of MC getting ganged by a group. Afraid of losing his 10% exp he shouts for MC to come to rescue (cp21). So author changes his world to make some events work that wouldn't if he was true to his words. Overall score TRASH/5 , would read again!...:3..-:^)-.-.-.-:P--:3-.--:P-..:D..:')-.-.xD-.-
story is alright but after chapter 40. translation gets even worse.