i love the concept of the story pretty much everything for someone who doesnt really like killing and just want somw world building kind a book. everything is good but the mc, he is kinda weak in character. there are parts that are completely hilarious. but i think you better explain why his farmer is different not just directly ending it as a bug. the storyline is getting boring too, atleast put some detail about what his doing or making. i think that you lack that part, all you want to show in your book how op he was and lazy but the title is about his farmers atleast give us some excitement of making this and that. its really lack something in that part. and the mc? he acts kinda stupid and annoying. atleast give him a personality that is firm. the story is a little weak too. have some terrible situations that makes the people in the story panic about their situation. just giving a beast tide is okay but not actualy saying what happen or their situation is not okay. and directly saying a lot of them dies a single night when you said its only difficult if they get stronger, i get it that its because of a certain system managers that the difficulty went up but it still unreasonable when the mc is not even facing that much. give us a feeling that the difficulty went up, not just a list of a lot of deaths. it made me like its not another news. you lack expressing that part
it's hella good. kinda of stale in the beginning. but picked up pretty fast. it was enjoyable. kind of corny ending. but overall peak
Very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters and seeing how far this novel will go. There are very few grammar mistakes with awkward phrasing here and there but that doesn't affect the story too drastically. Paragraphs are easy on the eyes which make this a very fun and relaxing read. Keep up the good work!
Still going strong really love how this is progressing. Keep up the good work and don't worry about the failed April fool's joke always next year haha
You mother****er author.................. Why not write more for free........................ I want to kill you!!!............................
Is this Mad Snail I see. Hope this isn’t one of his dropped novels. I hope I don’t have to go through the pain of waiting for tales of demon and god again...
Hi everyone
Welcome to my novel
I am an Egyptian writer, and I am now writing my new novel in Arabic
I am translating the chapters myself
I want to tell you that the novel has 500 Arab chapters so far. But this is the first time it's translated into English. I hope you like the story, and I hope my translation won't stop you from enjoying it.
I appreciate your support, and I hope to hear your thoughts and opinions all the time.
24 year old???? This is so amazing. As a detective, overly determined and comitted to her work, she's great. I love where this story is going. Can't wait. ??
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
What is with these abusive MLs and fearful FLs in C-novels??? Why is this a turn on to C-authors and da heck are they doing romanticizing this??? No, just no ?u200d♀️So here's my take on the story: I get that she was raised as a child bride for the ML from young and that she's eternally grateful for his family that they adopted her and her sister buuuuut! GIRL! You ain't filming no ancient history drama! You know you are allowed to walk out on his life, right?How about just working your a$$ off into paying what you owe the family of that scum sh!tty husband of yours? Who said you gotta exchange your body for your debt??? TSK TSK TSKShe is literally shaking everytime they are together and of course during intercourse she's always in pain but refuses to say it out loud! I mean I know in the synopsis divorced was mentioned but please someone tell me it will be soon! I can't wait for the bastard to grovel and beg on her feet! ?