WOahhhhh I really like the premise of this novel and the world building so far. I look forward to learning about the main character and how he will grow. The main character seems deeper than a simple cut out of an isekai character, and I like that a lot.
Decently good novel but it is filled with grammar errors and my personal pet peeve getting the male and female pronouns reversed ……………………………
I first picked this up to skip time but I was soon so into it I ended up spending all my coins and fast passes so I'm on ch 66 and I want to read on but sadly can't. The story is amazing and also the character development. The mc isn't op yet a least which gives a sense of realism over all amazing novel and would deff recommend
I absolutely love novels with the main characters like this. So heartless and smart. The world building here is amazing, novels and manga like this is severely underrated.
Keep going K E
Hello, struggling author Romeru here. First of all, thank you for checking out my novel, love you guys. This is my 3rd contracted novel here and hoping 3rd time is the charm T_T So please do try and read it if you have time.
As tradition, here is what to expect when reading my novel,
The Good:
1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.
2. I am your friend.
The Reality:
1. My main character is flawed and imperfect. He may be an apex badass, but there are moments when he is proven wrong. So if you are expecting a perfect MC who seem to always make the best decisions, you might not like this.
2. Grammar mistakes. I tend to mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my native language T_T
3. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.
4. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.
5. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.
6. Character driven – The story will develop in a way that advances the story of the characters, MC or not.
6. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span, so please do point out if I mistake what hair color one of the characters has.
Here's what to do before reading this book:
1. Play some music.
2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.
3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I could do when people could fly using magic swords.
4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book.
Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)
Cultivation + Modern Setting, something rare, done more than just well.
No comments regarding grammar. With an anti hero MC that actually has common sense.
Let's see, if you give him a glass of water you get back a swimming pool. So, if you hook-up your disciple with a girlfriend, would you get back 10000 girlfriends or a girlfriend 10000 times prettier? Just asking.
Really great book to read! it is just theres no update till now, was it axed or dropped? would appreciate it if someone would enlighten us!!
This is one of the best stories I’ve found here... The characters are engaging, the storyline well developed, and beautifully written. I couldn’t stop reading until I finished everything posted and when I finished, I was utterly distraught because I really NEED to know what happens next & who the other maidens were... I just wish the author was still updating. Even if it was updated only once a month... I’d be estatic. Vyvyyan- you are a gifted & captivating storyteller and I truly hope you finish this story.
I actually love spiders, you know. [cough] Chrollo from Hunter X Hunter [cough] Feitan from Hunter X Hunter [cough] Rui from Kimetsu no Yaiba [cough].
Honestly I'm not good with reviews so I'm just going to say this the fights are good I like where the story seems to be going I love the humor . . . . .and I think I might just be in love