The story has a really interesting plot and Deuris has made some changes that really improve the story. I tried to read the MTL but there was too much nationalism for me. Really enjoyable and there are really long chapters.
hello, i haven't started reading yet so here's some puns :
-I had a crazy dream last night! I was swimming in an ocean of orange soda. Turns out it was just a Fanta sea.
-A crazy wife says to her husband that moose are falling from the sky. The husband says, it’s reindeer.
-Ladies, if he can’t appreciate your fruit jokes, you need to let that mango.
-Geology rocks but Geography is where it’s at!
-Did you hear about the restaurant on the moon? I heard the food was good but it had no atmosphere.
-Can February March? No, but April May.
-Need an ark to save two of every animal? I noah guy.
-I don’t trust stairs because they’re always up to something.
I didn't complete the book yet, but I will in two days. This is one of the best novel I've ever read. The chemistry between them is like o ma God
You deserve more than this! Like, just look at your storyline, characters, the best choice of words, a poetic touch, romance which slowly changes to dark romance! I ship Amanda and Lijah, and no one can stop me.
Thank you very much for an invite for a free reading of your creation. The story is interesting, has a great detailed description, and is a prolific writer that knows his plot well, interesting as you go on with the chapters.
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Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review.
4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed.
So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals:
1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total)
2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun!
Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!
Review as of chapter 31.
The book is really good so far but there are a few small grammatical but they don’t break the immersion too much.
The updating stability is amazing, at least 2 chapters a day and the chapters are also a good length.
Overall it is a very good book.
it's my first time reading a web novel. I think this one was a good one I am glad this one is my first web novel. thank you author. please continue updating more and more! !!
Plot is good. It may not be the most original ever, but that is not necessarily a bad thing at all. The first chapter picked me up so nicely with a vivid description that I got into the story as well. I think the strongest point of the author is setting the scenery, while writing mistakes (grammar etc.) appeared here and there. It's still very much readable.
just wake m⁸....Hiatus and dropping novels are trending on this site right now...Don't get your hopes up.They just want to prevent the other party from picking it up.Shameless Qidian International ...
Complete Martial Arts Attribute. .
Another novel with the same old plot, get every1 inside a VRMMO, make the protagonist be a nobody then send him back in time, still waiting for a novel where the protagonist will be someone great without having knowledge of the future...Anyway with no romance/cute interactions and no life outside the gaming world, this feels like a cultivation novel where the MC cultivates for 1000 years and we read 10k chapters of the same thing happening over and over again, plot isn't very interesting either so...
Awesome I am not yet in my teens so I don’t know how to judge but overall I like the overpowered mc and the character development is good so I think I will be looking forward to chapter fourty-two so I recon people should read this tho it’s pretty sad when the mobile system feels like it gets ignored because all the attention is going towards the two supreme systems