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It's a very interesting read! The premise is really good and I really like it very much. Of course the writing could be improved, but everyone can improve
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I really like the novel its way different from the rest. The only part I don't like is where the mc sometimes gets scared of his wife and she has also beaten him once, I hope as the novel progresses mc become the dominant one. I don't mind if FL is the dominant one but if she beats the mc and mc is a simp, that is a big NO. That's just my opinion but overall if you ignore this the novel is great .
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can't get enough of this even with the Privilege chapters. it's become my nightly read before bed and i fond myself looking forward to our every day.
you can try it it isn't that bad from the raws the fact of the strength in the game increase the strength of reality every player has it only the store is unique and also to play the game what you need isn't headset but rather a container some people enter the game through pendant or even cards and it can be anything so you can give it a try (from ch70)
I came here right after watching the anime, and what can I say? This mesmerized me in such a level, I'm absolutely in love with this creation. The novel gives more depth to the history, I highly recommend reading it and appreciate every sentence of this magnificent work
This is such an amazing novel that needs more recognition. Najib is such a talented writer that he can just make a masterpiece with eyes closed!.. All my love and support.. Denise Ashley
Hello everyone! The shameless author here, supporting his own novel, hehe. It took a while for me to review my own book, but here it is:When I and my friend were idealizing this story, we were trying to make something different from other novels. Because of it, you will not find magic, system, or cultivation here, but a lot of futuristic technologies that explode things!! ... not all of them, but some do, actually!District 42 is a Steampunk/Cyberpunk story, mixed with transmigration and references to Nordic culture. The MC is a military guy. He has a funny personality, but gets serious when needed, and can even become cold and frivolous to solve a problem.The start of the story has a fast pace, and it stays like this until the 20th chapter or so. That's it. I hope you all enjoy this novel!
can you please send the raw link? I haven't read it yet but the synopsis hooked me on. I hope the translations are good or at least readable enough.
The ending sucks. If you want to be throughly disappointed and disgusted, start reading this story. I have never read a book with such a terrible end.
