Absolutely loved the story. I just wished we could see Man and Type develop as well. But overall beautiful
It's really well thought out and written, the pacing for each chapter is nice and it's not a info dump like some novels with a system.
I wish you luck and hope you update stably.
Mm the cover is amazingg, but also a danger
passable time waster. however, it's quite annoying that this is one of those "reincarnated former martial expert" MC that act like a kid... the way he's been acting so far, his naïvete... lets just say it would've gotten him killed if he regained his past status (royal knight, protector of the king)
if it's out of ten I rate this one an nine....nice update speed.
I just read to the currently last accessible chapter with fast passes (chapter 170).
It is noticeable that the author is an amateur author. But not in a bad way. Most things are top notch. It's just that things are not always fleshed out like in the stories of the really good authors and some strategies are a bit linear, especially in the beginning. But generally speaking this is a great story, playing in a great setting and the characters are better than anything I could write. Also the author respond to some comments. That's always a plus.
holy sh!t.... is this really continuation strongest abandon son ( original one ) or is this ur own version ?....
ah i dun care... i'll read it as long as it's free bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHh Screw qidians character count, also good novel only problem is not enough chapters to binge otherwise 5/5
So far im really enjoying the story. The world the author has build ahs caught my interest and so have the characters. I’m personally a fan of the multiple points of view given to us as it helps me undestand the thoughts and attitudes of the characters. I’m looking forward to how this novel turns out.
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hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel.
pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent.
to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes.
2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting.
3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble.
4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype.
cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow.
2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself.
3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
There are constant time skips. The system only exists when the author remembers this is a system novel. The author conjoined two premises, he is trying to write an actual, serious cultication story but decided to give the protagonist cheats. It clashes. Why do the cheats even exist? Now for my personal input, I don't like it after he joins the sect/family. It's pointless. Could have been a cool rogue, solo cultivator story. Now it's turning into a cookie cutter cultivation story. I would have given it a 2 but I will give it a 3 because I can see how others might like it.