I possess only one word to aptly describe this book - “perfect”.Even if you, like myself, do not hold a fondness for science fiction literature, I implore you to read this book. It is certain to alter your perspective on the genre. The author's ability to meticulously detail every aspect of the story is truly remarkable and makes comprehension effortless.For those who find solace in the pages of science fiction literature, this book is a must-have addition to your collection. The author's ability to paint a picture with words is unparalleled. Every scene is so vividly described that one can almost feel as though they are present in that moment.In conclusion, I unequivocally rate this book a perfect ten out of ten.
I like this story, it's so exciting to read, I want to read more please update more.
Used to liked this book a lot until chapter 41.
At first ,the mc is funny. Definitely funny. He's a bit dumb and stupid but still bearable somehow and it added more flavor in the story .
But, as the story continues, it started to become unbearable. At least for me.
There's few things I hate to see or I don't want to see in a novel. First was a dense mc and second was a super dumb mc. Sadly, this novel has both so I'll stop here.
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the story is so-so not exactly a revolutionary novel. ive not found that many good "player to npc" novels, and its fine to pass the time.
i will give credit where its due, so far the action the mc makes are usually fairly logical, i dont sit 50% of the time asking why the mc i dumb.
character interactions arent quite as limited as i first thought eg between him and players, there is various means to make contracts with players given certain conditions etc.
overall the novel is written well enough but it does nothing exceptional so there is really not much to draw in the reader and is generally not worth spending money on
translater has done an excellent job though so god speed to him/her
Lol last updated 51yr haha
A very catchy and original cover page. I like your idea for the story.
The plot is interesting, your characters are expressive. You're doing well!
As of this review, 36 chapters have been published.
Writing quality—quite good. Some grammatical mistakes here and there but nothing too distracting. A little clean up will do the trick. In terms of flow... wow. There wasn’t a moment where I wasn’t sucked into this story. The story switches between the first POV of the main protagonist, the self-proclaimed Demon Lord and Magic King Rupert, and the third POV of the people he had chosen to include in his grand plot. Both point-of-views were fun and entertaining, and I found that there was never a boring moment in either of these POVs.
The story centres around an ex-magical-overlord-turned-filthy-rich-businessman named Rupert Hargreaves, who, after being reincarnated into a different world, finds life to be a tad too boring for his diabolic, mystical tastes. In order to satiate his boredom, he indulges himself into the world of fictional entertainment (and the internet)—especially anime. Soon after, he brings his hobbies into the real world and began an anime-esque experiment/production in real life involving real people with his equally twisted deadpanned secretary, Alice Kang.
The overall premise of the story is similar to that of ‘To Be a Power in the Shadows!’ or ‘There Was No Secret Organization to Fight with the World’s Darkness so I Made One (In Exasperation)’. It is a story of a guy who is both bored enough and powerful enough to create a whole fantasy just because he could. In my honest opinion, this kind of plot is fun but hard to execute as the scale is quite large. On top of juggling between several protagonists in different settings, one would also need to make coherent ‘pulling-things-from-behind-the-scenes’ plans that doesn’t rely too much on Deus Ex Machina... or maybe just heap it on so that the humans will actually survive until the (obviously planned but shh) Last Boss battle... lol. In any case, it is advisable for the author to take caution in writing the story as it is easy to derail and make it tedious and boring to read.
Last but not least, my favourite part about this story—which I didn’t realise until more than a few chapters in—was the fact that this story involved a lot of queer characters. Also, the Uyghur girl? I have no choice but to stan.
All in all, this was a very enjoyable read and I look forward to more! Good work, author!
Currently at chapter 31, the novel seems to be truly good. The school bits are great and even though I would like a bit more interaction between the characters Infully understand why there isn't.
The teachers are great. As of right now with teachers such as professor Messen and Pompei just enough information is given to somewhat understand them while still having plenty of mystery and guessing.
Thus far the combat is exciting but a true magical duel has yet to happen, lookong at how the story is progressing though it shouldn't be too far off.
The pacing is probably the best part of the novelm Even though a bunch of new things keep getting introduced, nothing seems rushed. Everything seems to make sense as well.
I hope at some point we will be able to see the Mortal world amd have some info on that front.
Great job thus far author
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