Whispers Beyond the Rust - Reviews

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Cliche. Peak cultivator reincarnated and gets “op” cultivation technique. Sword intent weak. Cultivation weak. Can’t even use past laws, weak. I’m sure that if your a god reincarnated but let his cultivation be back at the start. You will still retain your understanding of laws. So he can somwhat bend it to his will but not very much. But meh. Story so far is cliche. Also there is many words and sentences that is wrong and does not sound right to me. Before you post your chapters please consider editing it first.Don’t want to be mean but this is so far my opinion of this novel.

The grammar..... it's so bad... It's worse than mtl, since mtl just replaces words with other words that don't make sense, while this is just wrong on a fundemental level

It's going on the right directionNo kid wish fullfillment with a harem of 500 virginsTry to lead the plot through innovative and original ways and not make him a victim that suffer and follow the flow.I don't know if you can go full racist (chinese does it in most modern novel against the japan though) but it could be fun.

The author gives us a stupid idiot soldier and believes that readers will be idiots with IQ5 and will believe him that a SPECIALIST who can operate special equipment is an idiot. There is a character in the story dumb-as,nob,IQ5,naive,childish,aggressive,maniac .The author is an IQ5 idiot to believe that normal readers will believe the nonsense he describes. Rating minus 100 .

"Hmmm? Wasn't that the group I met at the entrance... Bunch of weirdos but they are luring the monsters away."

" Well, they are our partners for this mission, so we have to communicate with them " The voluptuous woman said with a smile

In her head, if that indiscriminate Devour was to be used against the Martial Supreme, it may have chances of never going back to eating condensed Qi from the pits once it tasted a better quality of food. That was as complicated as it would be.

"I'm okay, thanks for rescuing me." Smiling weakly, she hugged the taller girl.

I…Have…To…Drink…

"We all are quite happy to share a conference with you kids..." Dr. Edmund starts, "We won't be dealing with anything very serious or hard to understand but we will be dealing with your brain's thinking extent. So kids think before you answer." Then Dr. May questions with a sweet smile that can only be compared with that of an angel, "Students how many of you love to dream or dream quite often?"

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