unnoticed feelings - Reviews

A face slapping novel... i know many of you would have already read this type of novel and so did I but still I am enjoying this and you all should also give it a try.story is well written so go for it.

Do you plan on making this book available anywhere else other than Webnovel.  Is so, were?  Also this is a great book.

I feel uncomfortable reading this novel, I understand that the MC has some problems to empathize or maintain stable relationships, almost as if he did not have common sense (it is my understanding of the MC so far), but it is repetitive and boring, it has a kind of system +1 point of interest, but it is suffocated by the normal world and its mundane problems, I do not feel special emotion towards the novel, the MC is oblivious to the reader, only his superficial thoughts are mentioned and we do not know why the MC reacts or acts differently forms in various occasions, sometimes he is proactive in helping (example: when he helped his internship partner) and sometimes he is passive (his partners leave him after losing interest or the MC acts "weird") there are not many examples because information is lacking about the MC and his life. Summary, the novel has nothing flashy or anything that calls my interest, I can only qualify it as a casual reading. (He has a system we expect some action, hot blood or a new world, it is boring to read about a man who acts "normal" despite having a system, I say the norm of the system is to have adventures or do something interesting) (Google translator)

I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.

Great story and nice character build. The background description is also amazing and interesting. This story has great potential. Keep it up, author!

5 Stars!!! It's basically Overlord but with a WW2 theme. There are some sections that are in spanish and have a lot of text gibberish. But a part from that it's a ok story!

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Here is 5* cause ggmissfortune is a ***** 4 1* ....thats just sad 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

this book was rather unique when it comes to character design and world building I was rather surprised to see that the main character isn't looking at the present.

Sigh? this novel has a lot of potential especially for the story it could be way better but a lot of things hold it down. For one the grammar is like a 7 year old is writing and does not have the vocabulary to express that the they want to say. Two is the thing that gets to me the most and that will be the romance on the novel yea at the start it’s ok it can get a passing grade but the more you read the more you start to see the faults it has, ok I get it if you can’t let go your high school crash that’s ok and the “most beautiful” woman loves you cool I have no problem with that but the most annoying part is the fact after all the changes the world has gone though you can’t it’s ok to have two women by your side, no one is forcing you to choose between one. It’s frustrating because he can understand to many things but still acts like a little bitch when it comes to love it’s really stupid. Those are like the two things holding this novel back.

This book is a MUST READ for everyone. Let's take a close look:1. After reading even three chapters you gets FULL understanding of the world, leveling up and how the magic works in this world. You don't have any questions as everything is clear and everything is left is to read further.2. The world itself is very clear, so it means author made detailed image of it in his or hers head and understand what to wrote about.3. The main hero is a genius, but he's not over-gifted and everything is balanced.I like how you do write and describe things, but I noticed some mistakes, and I advice you to install any app that corrects grammar and here you go!This story has a great potential so I added it to my list and will read further!

Ty for the chapter!~