unnoticed feelings - Reviews

Third person POV:

     He expect to hear gun shot that will end his life in this center of no man's land, but till he was out of sight the gun did not sound.

Puis un troisième obus explosa dans les airs à côté de sa tour de garde. Les éclats d'obus se plantèrent dans le bois de la tour mais un morceau vint se loger dans la cuisse gauche de Sludge.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

interesting story and world.good writing with a number of well thought out characters.the number of different plotlines that could intersect with each other is well considered.beasts,mystics and cybers make for some good angles and alliances.overall an interesting book and one im hopeful will continue and develop.

While it may be a bit early to review this book at the moment, based on the story so far and this author’s other books, I can guarantee that this is going to be absolutely amazing. Though from the looks of it, this book in particular will likely be quite dark, so if you don’t like violence I would probably suggest finding a different book. But then again, the story has barely started at this point, so most everything is still up in the air. I guess my conclusion is that, if you don’t mind a bit of violence and you like well written stories, this book is probably for you!

I am not a fan of FLs who act like they are a damsel in distress, could not say No to toxic men and are attracted to them.

This book is great! I can really delve in and get to know the characters and story line! So impressive! This is only a review on chapter 1 but already I'm hooked like a fish ?! haha I'm impressed this story makes my heart sway! so cool. I'm excited to read more! So far I can relate to all the characters in a way, it's magical and exciting!: ? inspiring work of art! thanks for writing

I bought all the current chapters to see if it was worth reading further and sadly it isnt to be.The novels synopsis is good and I have always enjoyed a good kingdom building themed story. Yet this one is dry, empty and just very bland. The progress of development is interesting but it jumps to fast around in its progress and misses some obvious points of technology that could have been developed. I could not find anything of merit, or to relate to with this MC just every chapter would appear as he wakes, decides to exercise, visit his old man with some ground breaking theory or invention, visits some industries and then goes home to develop further ground breaking developments then goes to bed. It just really didn’t inspire enthusiasm within me.Perhaps if the author introduced some tragedy, some form of perhaps romance etc may have given it some missing factors to develop further but even the war scenes were just robotic in delivery. Not to say, they sounded robotic, just very much a shopping list on how to do things.Overall, it has a good idea and a lot of potential, it is just the delivery was uninspiring and simply fell flat for me.Tl;dr - it has potential but it is up to the reader to determine this.