Kudos to the author, almost as if i watching a movie like LORDS OF THE RING, you should be proud of yourself because you did a good job. Thanks for sharing your excellent work with us.
This novel is just wonderful.Despite the need for improvement in the writing and its structure, the story is still enjoyable.The moment I started reading the first chapter, I instantly remembered novels about self-discovery, like “The Alchemist” for example, and truly this did not disappoint.It’s clear. It’s precise. It knows what it wants to tell you and does exactly that.Great work! ?
I see, so that's the case. She wasn't wrong though. If I would gain information from her, I really would indeed trust Echidna more. However, I've had enough of her "too calm" face. She doesn't understand the situation. She doesn't understand my situation. Thus, I must do the trials to save the Sanctuary, and everyone outside.
"Err….You can call me Matania, Tania, or Tan. I'm a mage that specializes in fire spells. I'm currently level 6 and part of East Wind mercenary group, nice to meet you!"
Even though Shusuke didn't stand in front of the sword or faced it , he still felt the chills as he had been struck by lightning. Sakumo didn't stopped there , Sakumo lifted the sword over his head and the image of the sword kept growing by the moment.
"About time. Did everyone make it?" The man slid down the tree and rubbed a hand along a slash on his stomach that slowly dyed his dark shirt with fresh blood.
His hands moved to the strings behind me and soon the top was lying on the ground. His hands moved to my breasts and he started massaging them. I moaned lightly.
Author-san, your book is amazing considering the fact that you are new to writing. some grammars are not so well written but doesn't affect the book. I like your main character and his interaction with his women... above all, he will make a good husband.
With profound emotional depth, this story masterfully intertwines dark fantasy, making Lucy's heart-wrenching inner conflict between vengeance and newfound responsibility captivating. The unexpected twist and high-stakes drama create a compelling journey towards redemption that keeps readers riveted. Suggested!
