Traveler: The Last of His Kind - Reviews

Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic

First of, I miss WW but I am happy about it being here. That sayd let's get to review!Translation Quality:5/5- Its perfect what do you expect?Update Stability:5/5- Since the start there where no unforseen hiatus or breaks. 5/5 really stableStory Development: 1/5- The Start is really good but more often that not the story get's streched without the need with unimportand chapters as well as boring informations.Char Development:4/5-Solid, good, niceWorld background:5/5Nothing to complain overall: 4.00Give this story a chance it is worth it. Don't worry even though it has a lot of boring and usless chapters it is absolutly worth it!

cool story... it;s a long time since i relaxed into a story like this. It's not about the characters or worldbuilding. It's just about the story and a great story at that. The author is an amazing story teller, i got so immersed on those long chapters i lost track of time.

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This is an very nove story but development of the Mc is left to be desired but I still like it it very in character of the Mc as he is shown to be kind

Does she look like it? Like she was hopeless?

An old man located in a remote mountain suddenly opened his eyes as he felt shocked while looking at the bloody sky.

「Firstly, to insert the thermometer, we have to loosen the asshole」

Ayden yang melihat gelengan itu terasa direntap jiwa dan raganya. Tanpa diminta, air matanya turun membasahi pipi. Pertama kali di dalam hidup seorang Neil Raeqal, menangis kerana wanita. Pertama kali di dalam kamus hidup Neil Raeqal, dia berasa pedih dan sedih kerana seorang hawa.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Nonetheless, its power was still great. The Six Solar Fingers was a High Earth level Combat Skill, and it was just the foundation. Using just one of the Six Solar Fingers was not something that someone in the Qi Jing or even the Qi Hai level could do.