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Overall... The story is very food. I just have one very irritating problem...Alex is way too passive and a pushover. At first it comes off as very kind and humble, then it became pretty stupid, to annoying then very irritating. He has all that money and connections but can't even protect is girlfriend. He literally promised to her dying mother that he would do everything to protect her daughter. It would have been ok if all those tragedy only happens to him but no, debbie suffers the worst. Actually I was kinda relieved that Debbie escaped this sorry excuse of a man, then she would probably can live peacefully. I mean if he really loved Debbie he should have announced to the whole world the she is the future Mrs. Ambrose that way no one would dare to put their hand on her. I get that he would prefer not to be seduced by a bunch of gold diggers, and like to lay low, but if he truly loves Debbie he would endures those things for her... Just want to get my thoughts out of my head and find someone to rant.And for the Author...I know it is written like this for the sake of the further part of the story, but its just too much. Who would endure something like this if they have the ability to prevents those events from happening, especially seeing his significant other being tormented. At least put some little satisfying moments every now and then. And please just kill Cathy...
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Honest reviews are here.. Sorry to the author, I try to read, but this novel is really not suitable with my taste.. Even though you explain on Ch0, "every mission has it reason behind it," I can't stand with the mission given by Janus system.. For example, "if you fail the mission, your sister die" or "if you fail the mission, you will die".. Even the rewards are ridiculous, you know why? When MC completes the mission, he gets a treasure box, but MC needs the key to open it.. To get a key, he needs to complete another mission.. The system mission will always be dangerous and threatening his life or other people's lives.. Even when MC succeeds, the sequence is MC will become an enemy with a powerful gangs/player.. EVERY mission that MC does will just make his life harder and harder.. No easy or normal standard level for MC.. Even Slash or Flame blast skills can be used 5 times per day..  So, if you love to see MC suffer hardship for THE WHOLE TIME (all chapter), this novel is for you.. I only read up to Ch50, but I can't take it anymore.. I feel like MC has been bullying and tortured by the author..
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I am baffled how anyone likes this garbage, the characters are all flat and boring, everyone is stupid, the MCs plot armor is off the charts, he gets exactly what he needs whenever he needs it, no effort, thought or hardwork involved, if you really enjoy this childlike wish fufillment novel, you are the worst.MC: "i need more exp" Author: "Np here's a monster tide"
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From time to time webnovel surprises me i think that's this is the most beta mc ever, then i will read another novel and what i tought to be the top beta will become some Giga chad in confront to the new and improved beta man ( in this case this novel).Soo where to start?This guy dies and is reincarnated in a world of magic. then dies again and is ressurected as an eternal slave. The little girl who kills him is like a name what do you need one to? from now on your name is zombie then in the next chapters he will be abused in all sorts of ways with insults beating and cutting of limbs. The mc? completly fine with it ( it seems that in the future he may also love her) he was a child when he was killed on the street, in daylight, his family forgotten by the killers ( they are nobles why should they care after all? )Later since the readers disliked the beta oh sorry the mc for being like: "Huh, so i am a slave? fine with me!" the author tried to patch it with an auxiliar chapter in which the beta will have his conscience rewritten by the system ( what whas the point on giving the mc a backstory since now he is no more than a husk?) so he can accept being a slave.this patch was worse tought at least to me ( slaves mc are a big no no, but forced rewritting of your conscience to be the perfect slave is an even bigger no no)*SLAPS NOVEL* This badboy contains so much beta energy that it can take a rocket to the moon and back
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So no spoilers. This book so far as I have read which is to Chapter 20. I know it is not a lot the translation seems to be machined or the person who translate does not understand English needs to be edited bad. You can get the gist of what is going on. The overall story is not horrible but the MC plot armor is super thick everything just happens no build up or accident. I think it was suppose to be accidental but if so the author or translater all failed that. Otherwise I would at least give this a shot for the free chaps and if you like it keep going. For me till this thing is edited to make sense I am done.
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This one does heavily remind me of the lord of mysterious, not that it’s bad in anyway, just  because there has been influences from know stories that I enjoy will make me want to read more of this.
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Don't write. You're talking about a select minority of people, but everyone is a jerk.Do you want humanity to lose its lineage, its past history, its culture?
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With 50 free chapters released and more steadily on their way, now is a good time to write a first review – one I will gladly come back to upon this work's conclusion sometime in the future.This is the third work in the author’s collection, one completed and one on hiatus, and the experience clearly shows. The author has continued to fine-tune their craft while leaving their core style clearly identifiable, and I am very excited to see how this story develops.The style is simple and succinct, though not lacking flair. Ease of reading and clarity aside, it lends itself particularly well to the expressive, larger-than-life dialogue, a prominent feature in the author’s works. The vivid and emotionally charged interactions of the characters play an incredibly active part in all aspects of writing, from characterization to world-building. It is a breath of fresh air in lieu of the swathes of grimdark and apathetic one-liners we readers are all too familiar with. The characters themselves live up to these expectations, their outlines clearly defined from the start, while leaving more than enough room for growth as the story develops. At the time of publication of this review, the main trio has been introduced and developed in great detail, yet sacrificing none of the mystery of unknown or untrustworthy character backgrounds. As the main powerhouse prepares for a wholesome exeunt, the two main protagonists, almost direct opposites of each other in all manner of ways, provide the author with a blank canvas to develop alongside the story’s progression. The world-building of the last fifty chapters provides a solid foundation for this approach, hitting all the right buttons. There’s intrigue, mysterious world politics, an innovative power system and enough enemies, hidden or otherwise, to keep the protagonists occupied for many story arcs to come. The power system especially is one I’m interested in learning more about. To avoid spoilers, it takes an unique three-pronged approach with some tasteful strategic terminology that leaves a lot of room for individuality. Unlike in many stories out there, the protagonists are not blessed with a completely unique class or unheard of element. Seemingly aiming to subvert this trope we instead have common building blocks, which will certainly build up to much more by virtue of characterization and originality, and not a fated bestowal of power because you happened to be in the right dungeon at the right time. The story is set up to be an epic progression fantasy, but with a twist best described as “out with the old and in with the new”, which you may have already picked up on. There are no issues with the grammar or linguistic quality of the writing, so the readers will have an unimpeded reading experience.I am rating it five stars for the quality so far and the great potential beyond, and would certainly recommend everyone to try it for themselves. If you are interested in well thought-out and slow power progression, lively characters, a methodically structured and intricate world, and an adventure story leaning more towards wholesome than dark, this is the book for you.
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A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title.A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive titleA rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel.First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you.Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters.Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world.Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided.I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.

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