Those Who Often End Up with a Dead Husband Know It Well - Reviews

I can see improvement in language and story from every proceeding chapter, keep this up ...️

This shouldn't even be in the trial reads with the quality of this story. It should just be translated right away without us needing to pick it. Seriously webnovel you are wasting our trial read spots. If you are thinking about reading it you won't regret it. It is very good.

Hello guys, Author here!While this is my meme novel, I find a lot of joy writing it.While you might find it cliche, this was my entire purpose for writing it. I want to combine all most selling points in WN, and create a great parody of it while keeping a good plot and funny action enact!I hope you will enjoy the read!

First thing is the cover, if you want to attract more readers, then either get rid of the text, or make the text readable, because you're gonna miss a lot of readers scrolling down quickly on their phones that way.Next is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is okay, not the best, but not the worst, a solid 4 stars. There are a lot of typos and grammatical errors, but it is still readable and a flow is still established that doesn't break the reader's concentration. (I don't know how you did it! I mean, I can notice all the mistakes, and there are a lot a lot and I mean a lot, but it doesn't take away from the reading experience for some reason? I'm really, really confused right now.)The stability of updates isn't able to be measured right now, so it's a solid 4 stars.After is story development which is a splendid 5 stars. Honestly, the way the story is developing is very engaging, as mentioned above, and I just can't get enough of the story. A really good job author! The only thing I have for the author is that I am waiting for a unique twist to the story, something that I haven't read about before, as all the events that have happened before have already been used by other authors.Character design is also stellar, 5 stars. I love the way the siblings interact and I just can't get enough of their cuteness. It's honestly incredible how you wrote their interactions, not too much, but not too little conversation either, it's just right. Again, like the story development, I am just waiting for the uniqueness in the characters, as their relationship and their designs are again, something that other authors have used already.Finally is world background, a solid four. This is just because the world is really cliche at this point. I am once again waiting for the uniqueness that the author will come up with for the world, as it is just a normal cultivation world right now.Overall, I would have said it was a highly recommended read, except for all the errors in the writing. I definitely recommend you get an editor, or somebody to proofread your chapters as to lessen the mistakes.So, in the end, it's a novel that I would recommend casually, in passing. Not something so great, but that might just be because I place a heavy emphasis on spelling and grammar.Great Job!

We really enjoyed the story I hope you give us at least 6 chapters before going to seclusion ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????:-(:-(?:-(?:-(:-(?:-(?:-(?:-(??:-(?:-(?............ .. Too much love to the story

5 stars for having a hot yandere cultivation sect master mom, as well as being in a world where only women can cultivate. Thats practicaly guaranteed no Annoying young masters

Nice plot you have. It's very intriguing and mysterious, I love it! But it would be better if you used some coma ( , ) in your dialogues. That's all I could say basing from my level of experience and level of criticism.

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This book is very much what it says on the synopsis, its a book where he only has a proficency panel to see his progress/complete incomplete skills, very very basic system in essense, its a good story but the MC is very much both naive and a coward early on and while the world is dangerous we have yet to see if its just paranoia or if theybreally are out to get him. Overall well worth the read if you like alchemy/money hungry/cautious protagonists.

Amanda blushed a little and reached out her hand, allowing him to help her up. "Yeah, but this is normal for me, as they always jump all over me whenever I bring food home."

Constitution: 321

Before Xiao Che exited, she asked that what does acupuncture have to do with raising cultivation speed of her arts? Xiao Che told that to explain it he will require touching complex medical knowledge which she can't understand (because he can't tell her about his pearl). But she was earlier convinced about abilities of this man by his acting professional, so she didn't questioned further. She changed question and asked how did he acquired so much knowledge because she had suspicions that with so much medical knowledge, all of Blue Wind Empire should have known his name, let alone Floating Cloud City. Xiao Che told that he obtained all his wisdom from his master and that he is the only successor of that great master honestly. He told few stuff about his master. He even further instructed her that not even his Little Aunt or Grandpa knows about this and she is the second person who is known about this fact now. His face showed natural sadness on mention of his master unlike his acting before which convinced Xia Qingyue even more. She even praised his pure-hearted master who spent his live curing and helping people sincerely. But she once again asked that if he is sure that his treatment will really let her permanently cultivate thirty percent faster. And that he needs her to show only her back? He joked that if she wants to show him everything then he is fine with that too. She started moving towards bed and warned Xiao Che coldly from doing anything funny there, or she won't be forgiving him. Xiao Che was excited and told that she has the capability to kill him with just slap. So even if he has such ideas he won't dare to execute them. Qingyue was hesitating as she was shy but temptation of cultivation growth speed permanently raising by 30 percent was something that nobody can't resist so she unbuttoned herself after lying on the bed and covered her front side with quilt. Xiao Che started enjoying the scenery of that body which seemed to be created by the heavens themselves. Qingyue shouted to start immediately. Xiao Che started acupuncture and he was so skillful that he didn't even let his finger touch her skin at all. Xia Qingyue was paying attention to all piercing needles and was surprised after noticing that Xiao Che has to use his profound strength (which was already very lacking due to his low cultivation level) for this acupuncture. Xiao Che's face was red and his brows were sweating. For first 20 needles he was operating flawlessly but now his hands started trembling. After thirty needles his speed became slower and slower. He has to use his left hand for the treatment as Sky Poison Pearl is embedded in his left hand however he himself was a righty. He was actually trying to open the profound for Xia Qingyue. After quarter of an hour, fifty four needles pierced Qingyue's body. The cold mist erupted from all her pores and finally he removed the needles and said that it's done after sighing in relief. Xia Qingyue felt that she is flying in heavens. She couldn't believe that it's her own body. She almost jumped in fright and shock from this and forgot that she is not wearing anything. But as her speed of circulating her arts has increased she immediately covered herself with her powers. She felt that even her master will be startled after seeing her new body. Xiao Che weakly spoke that does she believe him now. He was looking like a dried mango now. She replied that she believes in him and he is a hidden gem in the Xiao Clan, but still she would be leaving after months so why has he shown his abilities to her? Why has he granted a favor to her and tried so hard for her?