The Temporal Paradox - Reviews

The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably.Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection

Don't read this book. The book very illogical, it's like reading the delusions in a child's mind. With the general characteristics of bad books, the main character acts self important, as if the whole world put aside time to oppose him, the usual greed, childishness, hypocrisy, selfishnes, ... . . The only redeeming thing about his book is the "world background

The Adult Content tag should be removed since the explicit scenes have been removed.Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos

First of all, I am not a pro at making reviews 2nd It's my opinion and what I think about it. 3rd I don't care if anyone will be offended by this.and 4th I read up to chapter 9The story has good potential but grammar has problems, the systems (power level, the name color) is not good (maybe gets better later), plot armor is thick, I think the MC is dumb and contradicts himself.Over all good but the mc to cliche for me and the grammar and systems need polishing.

Amazing book, please get it officialy instead of trial. The beginning is good, and the main character seems calm and cool. There is some mystery element in the novel. Characters are also described pretty well.

Interesting novel... Just curious if each world will have different realms and different cultivations as we already saw Magical & Physical cultivation... I feel it will be a lot and conjested... Just hope author adds 2-3 other methods & some can be repetion but with him going to a new world already a bit stronger... That would show progress instead of re-training for 30 worlds...

This novel has basically been stealing views by stealing and cropping the covers of popular novels and hoping readers get confused. Not cool.

Amazing novel ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️. You can give it a try, I'm sure it will satisfy any virtual world lover. The starting is rather sad but romantic

This novel not interesting like i thought. The story plot was too rushed and sometimes it doesn't make sense at all. It not interesting like apocalypse novel that i've read. The only thing that i like from this novel was because some comment said that it was BL romance. That why i would love to try read this story but too bad...

It shows great potential a lot of leading phrases that invoke curiosity and makes the reader want to come back a potential nail bitter and i like the world building

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He doesn't become discouraged though because he knew that Nasus ultimate could definitely be consider a move for a Defense Path. Because it doesn't require an action to attack but just grow stronger and more powerful.