The Temporal Paradox - Reviews

"Waalaikum salam…" kata keluarga Jeni.

Shiro didn't listen as he flash stepped right next to the tear. He reached through and everyone watched as he pulled something out.

(Wait shouldn't my breathing be affected by now- Oh wait, screw common sense! I'm getting out of here!)

"Ah, Yes I assume you are Chris, Chris Pang, I am Doctor Jarold of the Fleinclien clinic" Jarold replies

But the meteor men beg to differ

The author knows what he is doing. The story is fast paced and interesting. It has a strong, unique start, breaking away from the standard. Not to mention it features a female protagonist. The writing style is interesting I must say. It ain't poetic or overly descriptive, but every word has it's place. It reads easily and really immerses you into a world that the author is trying to portray. Keep up the good work! ?

Story is fresh still wondering what pair stands for tho , can't wait for more chapters. Kinda obsessed with Dek .while some chapters are short some are long you kinda get excited for upcoming chapter and dialogue style story is much easier to read to be honest

Man, the setting of the story is  out of this world. please sir we need more chapters of this masterpiece.Will be looking forward to working with you

Let me start by saying the First chapter almost traumatized me like I was shedding tears for the MC to the point I wanted to just ??? the ML. My dear MC just suffer for something he didn't do and for him to steal love the person who killed even me couldn't do sure thing without getting revenge. Overall love the story and MC(so cute(●♡∀♡)).