The storage keeper - Reviews

how wonderful love it

this is gold.worth the readthe story is quite unique for me.though the MC has a cheat but it doesn't make him OP.the story has a lot of potential, room to grow and development to make

Worst translation I ve seen. ”he” becomes “she” on the next line and comes back to ”he” later. ”soul condensation” becomes “spirit refinement” then “soul refinement”. Can’t remember all but last is “ye cheng” becoming “ye city” and “flat river dynasty” becoming “ping jiang dynasty. The story is still pretty good but the translation is even worse than google translate

This is waste of you time.Don't read this Novel....too much nonsense.Mc is kinda useless. this Novel drag too much........................

Overall it's pretty decent, with fun and likable characters and a somewhat interesting world. Though the dialogue feels bad since they talk exposition most of the time, it is still an enjoyable read.There are a few issues with the writing, as there are sometimes missing or misplaced commas, periods, apostrophes, and etc. Along with some missing words.Though it's not a big deal as I can still understand it, it does ruin the flow and takes you out of the book.I recommend using grammarly and a bit of proofreading.

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Heh ? another!! Author, im slowly looking forward to the development, its seems like there’s more story to it than meet the eyes

"..." I just looked at it and went to a truck full of bags of dirt.

"Ohhh." Mr. Peru released Kon's nose and flew toward the grey, caving ceiling. Sany missed him and landed hard on Kon, planting her elbow into Kon's chest. Kon's body folded like a fragile card and for a moment he took a shape of a perfect 'u'. Then his legs and hands fell back to the ground, and he resumed his snoring, lying sprawled on the floor that smelled like some bear's sweaty armpit.

Cahir was confused, he had thought that there were no planets in this section of space. He was about to ask Karin about this, but before the words came out, his ship fell forcefully towards the planet.

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"I still have Class 2 Monster Cores in my Space Belt, so I still need to take part in the Class 2 Monster Cores evaluation later." Sasuke plainly said. Right now, the evaluation was only being held for Class 1 Monster Cores; the evaluation for Class 2 Monster Cores wouldn't begin until after this one finished.