The storage keeper - Reviews

I stepped out and found Thorn waiting for me right outside the door, he looked to be deep in thought but also alert to when I'd be out. He noticed me and stood up, standing directly in front of me. He didn't say anything just stare at me, his hand slowly lifted and he caressed my face with his hands. I couldn't understand what he was doing, he lowered his head until I could feel his warm breath on my face. That was when he turned his head to whisper in my ear,

"Whatever" Franky pouted "listen up Zoro you won fair and square so the liquor is yours, just be sure to savor it after all it's one of a kind."

"Oh, I know," I say as I take the pot off the fire and go to place it on the table when I notice that the rook has cleaned it off. Well, at least he can clean. I walk back over to my side of the room and pick up two bowls and a spoon for myself then go back to the table. I take the pot and pour off some soup for myself than hand the pot to the rook and begin to eat. *Not the worst thing I ever made, next time a little more spice maybe or may-.* My thought is cut off by the sudden slurping sound coming from the other side of the table.

"Well, if this world is identical to the world that I built then there's a boss that needs to be defeated before we can leave here."

There are minor spelling mistakes, but those don't bother me that much.  Overall, it's a good read.

In my opinion, the cover and the title are a little bit plain and the prologue is too short and didn't hook me quite much. I saw similar things like this before, about the adventure from the weak being to the god-like being or stuff. I read five chapters, I could say the writing style is quite nice, the character Rufus is really great. The plot and the setting of the world are quite decent.Keep up writing, author. You did great so far.