The writing quality is excellent, grammar is great, updates are rolling, and story development is awesome. The characters are cool but i'd like more description of what they look like and what their underlying motives are. The world-building is fantastic but I'd like more environmental description. This story hits just about every checkbox except I notice that the story is too often dialogue without anything else, so add that and this story will be elite.Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey". Cheers