Great start can't wait for more, but a quick tip try putting more emotions for parts like not understanding that grandpa died or why his dad hit him ,his parents death, his frustration at the killers lack of understanding and cruelty and the lack of sympathy from the onlookers... Tho I don't know if you were planning on making him a dunce because what I can grasp from these chapters it doesn't seem as tho he has any form of education probably because their poor but a 15 year old won't act like that. But otherwise, great work
