the orange eyed girl. - Reviews

I really like the story. the author can describe the story really well. but, i feel pity for Nico. keep spirit author .keep up the good work.

a good one well written?????????must try

Translation Quality 4/5 ✖3Stability of Updates 5/5 ✖2Story Development 1/5 ✖10Character Design 1/5 ✖10World Background 1/5 ✖10The total score 0.29714285 =1/5

Hi All,I wanted to reach out to express my sincerest apologies on not being able to finish my previous novel.This will be an edited version of my previous work with a similar name. There were some parts that I were not happy with on the previous novel and i will work to fix these issues, and to continue with the story until the end. Definitely not for those under 18 as the story progresses. The relationships are not going to be one dimensional where the relationships are just physical, so I'll try build them rather than protagonist banging thousands of people mindlessly. His harem will have interesting characters that are not often in others!Enjoy

Waiting for new chapter.(You can find this book in MTL but it is very confusing with name and story, so I hope you continue to update chapters)

Raw title: 最佳特摄时代Status: 717 Chapters (ongoing).......................................................................................................................................

Okay, so i've read the first couple of chapters - and so far, i like it! There is a lot of grammatical errors (i pointed one out), but it's actually not that bad, considering that english isn't your first language. Throughout the chapters, i can sense the hours you've spent creating the ''new world'' he appears in, and the characters, which is so cool! Keep up the good work! <3

This book is really well written so far(chapter 71) hope you continue to put effort into keeping this updated.

Let's say the Kamehameha normally costs 500 mana to launch. Seeing as you aren't proficient in doing so, you'd have to brute force your way into converting the mana to ki, making it cost up to 2,000 mana. However, if you perfectly master the art of conversion, it will cost no extra mana. Simply 500 points of it.

"How about in a little over an hour?"

he shok his head "ohh don't worry about anything Olivia I'm here to protect you I promise, he grab my hand in his and squeeze a little telling me to believe in him.....

Jessica:may sinasabe ka idiot?! Vanessa:(di lang pala mukhang palaka bingi din -_-)