the orange eyed girl. - Reviews

"I-I am going out first," said Hermione awkwardly as she hurriedly left the room.

A loud moan and squirt hits the floor for the 60th time today as Rias pants as she can feel the sensation of my cumming deep inside of Koneko's womb

"She has something going on with her family. She's gone there."he lied as he remembered that the girl was still crying upstairs.

The room seemed to be underwater. Creek's ears couldn't pick up any bits of what they were talking about. His palms sweat and his heart was thundering in his chest. Branch subtly slipped his hand under the table and gripped Creek's wrist, giving it a loving squeeze. The gesture was electrifying, the unexpected warmth of energy flowing from his mate's touch and soothing many of his erratic feelings. He was able to take in a breath, looking back over again to see Branch giving him the smallest, most gentle smile. It was almost like he was saying, It's okay. I've got you. Pressure built behind Creek's eyes and he took in another shaky breath, pulling in as much positive energy he could find. It was going to be a horribly long night.

.....Hey,let him play with you....He kind of like you and your scent,come bold ,someone dash out the room with a gun and told Arjun to open the gate and Bruno follows quietly..

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

And we could all use a little change

Still, when I think about it, eh? What? She didn't deny it, was this some kind of flag or signal?

Dark chuckled. "Hu hu, you must be curious, right? Well then."

Review at 16 chapters.  The first couple chapters of setup were fine.  The writing quality is not good, the dialogue is written in constant circles listing the same activity as if trying to fill out word count.  Stuff like “I have to steal her for this money” followed by “I started stealing her first so I could get money.  Chapters 3-16 all include the repetitions with no contribution to the story.  I would not recommend in this current state.  It’s possible it gets better later, but based on the first 16 chapters, I don’t recommend reading in the current state, even if the synopsis seems good

I'm not exaggerating, this is the kind of story I'll advise anyone to read, at least once In their life time, it's soo good?...like, I'm in love with the male lead, he is such a green flag ?