The man forgotten by them - Reviews

Hello readers. The author here.  I'm giving myself a 5-star review. ? ?A few notes about the book.-> This is a personal journey about a football/soccer player with a system. It won't be just about matches and some training but also include some bits about his personal life. A key question to my plotting is how the MC's personal life affects his career and playing ability in individual matches. But of course,  there'll be exciting matches in the plot showing the MC's rise. Be assured. I have to stop there with the spoilers ??I do hope you try out the book. Thank you. ?

I dont do reviews but decided this book/novel was worth it since its so Well written and story progression is steady. I do wish for more chapter released daily but thats just me being greedy haha thanks for all the hard work so far and cant wait to see where this story goes and how far your willing to take it.

It's a really nice story.. actually much better than what I had expected. There is no trouble with grammer. The story is something that I have been looking forward to since who knows when. Though some people might not like it as its not everyone's cup of tea. It would be great if he has his own daughter.. hehehe! daughter be like...

Most people are probably going to think of the legendary mechanic but its pretty much nothing like that. MC transmigrated into a different world(not a game world) with a system. He absorbs herbs to gain points and uses those points to create mechanical soldiers. His cheat is giga OP and I see no harem or romance so far.

I wanted more chapters a week                                                                                         .                                                                   .                                                                                .                                                                   .                                                                .

It's a story where monsters from various other worlds come and invade earth & many people became zombies & animals mutate & become monsters& are hostile to survivors, some get super powers. And some aliens become allies of survivors. Some are self centered tered It's a good story. I recommend this novel. I love it.

The writer just made me attracted to this book like a magnet, I honestly just started reading the book but even the beginning is amazing, a big thumbs up to the writer.

good work, but try to not end this prematurely like your other tho, some of them feels too rushed both in character development or the story progress itself. this one have far wider range of possibility, to try to not messed it up

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Good word flow with no word problems. Novel is good so as the plot. Mc isn't over persistent but gradually becoming a reverse villian. I like it . You should like it to.

Reviewed at chp93:WQ(3/5) - There are some mistakes(typos, extra words, wrong sentence structures) but it's few and far in between. Nothing amazing but it's readable enough. SD(2/5) - I'm not a huge fan of the pacing of the story. It feels very "jerky". Like a car shifting gears too quick. The plot progression so far has been lacklustre in my opinion. The premise is interesting enough but can't raise the score above a solid 3. Now for the "plot" for those who care, pretty alright. It's decent but not ground-breaking. So far we have a few chps of Selena and MC. It mostly depends on your preference, pretty rough but still quite vanilla.CD(3/5) - I'm torn on this. The MC is interesting enough though frustrating at times. The issue is that the way the author introduces us to him as a character, there are far too many perspective shifts, it's told through flashbacks and having too many in any medium is never a good idea. It's fine to be used sparingly to show past events but thats the issue, here it's used as a tool to convey the MC's char to readers, even worse is it's in parts. It might contribute to that "jerky" feeling I get when reading. Now I commend the author for actually building side characters. For example, Selena and Verona are given a fair bit of screentime and inner monologues to give us an idea of their thoughts and character. This can be a double-edged sword however, as focus might be shifted off the MC. But I'm glad to say the author divided the focus quite well. Now why I'm torn on this is the fact I like the side char building but absolutely abhor the MC's char building itself. It feels inorganic and doesn't flow well compared to how the side chars are shown.US(4/5) - The author seems pretty consistent in his updates and actually responds to his audience.WB(4/5) - The world itself is slowly being built and honestly it would be a solid 3, I gave it a 4 just because it's piqued my interest and is genuinely interesting. The world the author is writing seems mysterious and intriguing, u can't help but think there are far deeper secrets due to the hints here and there. In conclusion, a decent but rough read. The idea is solid but the execution isn't.  The pacing and plot of the story needs quite a fair bit of work, especially with the MC's char building. It just feels completely inorganic to show the character like this. But here's the great kicker, premium chps are locked at chp30. That is going to greatly hurt the exposure this novel is going to get. For the word count of chps, it's just not worth it. I might return to this novel in the future but so far it doesn't look too promising. All the best author and I hope this review helps.

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?