The man forgotten by them - Reviews

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This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it.Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet  a children's book is more fun than this.i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it.right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.

I am sorry if I skimmed over the first chapter, but I found it really mysterious even at the beginning. And I love a mystery in the story. -The writing quality is readable and understandable. For someone who is dumb like me in processing words, I can read it. -The stability of updates... As an author who fails, I don't really mind the stability as long as you update and upload a chapter.-The story development, I will still have to read more, but I don't have time for that as an author trying to achieve something. However, looking at the number of chapters, there is a story. And that's what matters.-Character design and world background could be labeled as one, but my thoughts on it depends on the writing quality. So its as good as five stars. Good luck and God bless.

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Beautiful and want more the writing and the details are to the poi and don’t leave me confused and annoyed love this!

it's so good ive already added in my library

Interesting story indeed but it feels a bit slow but I can't stop reading it. More chapters please and upload regularly please. Thanks you for your hard work

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