The lightning Descendant - Reviews

I love this story,got me hooked from the first chapter
The MC is quite intelligent and the world building is very good
You should try this

oh my god!! I just loved the way the first chapter is written. The scenes weren't detailed yet they could be understood and virtualized. I enjoyed the first chapter and now turning to another. #lovedthestory

I will rate you give stats for this one.
The start alone was able to capture my attention.
At least it has a better start than the God level mage.
Moreover, the character uses the lightning element. One of my best elements.
Great work.
Can't wait to see how it will go!

This Story will be super intresting.
The author start this time was much better than what he started previously.
I am a fan of your first work: The God level Mage.
I can't wait to see what would happen with this one too

Amazing! Another story from my most favourite author. It even started well this time. The start for this story is totally amazing.
I like the synopsis too. It's simple and short.
I am looking forward to more releases.

Nice story.
Great start and obviously a good choice.
Setting is easy to see and one
The main character is quite stubborn I like it

Nice story. The setting is almost perfect and good. I like the story very much. The first paragraph for the start was what made me like the story. Great work author. And I hope you don't stop posting the God level mage

The synopsis surely hooked me up.
As for the first chapter, it's one of the best ever.
It's very good. I like this story too. It's definitely amazing and wonderful.

The opening chap made a grand opening. And it sure did hooked me up, though only it has 1 chap for now. But As I have read, you have passable quality. With flying colors I must say [img=recommend] The only thing I can point out was the paragraphs were too long. Maybe you can cut them and let the readers rest in between

Would highly recommend this novel, it has an amazing story that hooks you straight in.

The way the magic is do is very interesting and the characters are just as interesting.

I'd highly recommend giving this novel a try it is a great read especially if you like magic

Plot is good. It may not be the most original ever, but that is not necessarily a bad thing at all. The first chapter picked me up so nicely with a vivid description that I got into the story as well. I think the strongest point of the author is setting the scenery, while writing mistakes (grammar etc.) appeared here and there. It's still very much readable.

Has FANTASTIC character development and is a great plot. Incredible story, high-quality writing that is rarely found on this platform. Fast, action-packed pacing with a legitimately smart mc who grows visibly as a character. All in all A+ work. I would recommend this novel to anyone capable of reading it. Keep up the good work!