The lightning Descendant - Reviews

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The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation.

I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store.

Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one.

In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line.

Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

I like it that MC is fierce and doesn't sit back and let others dictate his life to him. I also like how creative the writer is in regards to the superhero plot. Travis certainly is an interesting character, who I would love to see level up from weak to strong.
Okay flow of writing and chapters are understandable, only wish there were more than three chapters. Good job Author-san. A good read that I highly recommend to all WN readers.

Great start!
Amazing plot and character's design is dope. I will rate you 5 stats this time.
I am one of your biggest fans on your old book. The God level mage. Can't wait to see how this story will go!

This novel started strong. While there were some parts I feel could have been explored a bit more, pacing was fine too.  however, when the author started to  copy\paste half of previous chapters, continuity and readability broke.

This story is good and shows potential. The only thing I can complain about is the spelling and grammar. If the author/translator went back and fixed that then they would be more popular and would have a happier audience. It ruins the mood when you have to unscramble letters and do detective work once every couple of paragraphs to figure out what's going on.

Honestly, I don't often read overpowered characters.  But, I like this story.  I like smart characters.  I'm really looking forward to the development of the main character.

while I really enjoy rushed storys this is on another lvl. it's to the point that it starts to be kind of random also....
wth are ****** THESEE FOR you put them every 10 sec in the text

An enjoyable read since I love superheroes and I can't wait to read the other chapters. I personally would describe more and use less sound effects like the 'woosh' and all that. It had more of a comical effect and made me laugh when the mood and tone was serious. I know. I'm unique

I like the start of the novel. The author did a great job on the narration as well as conversations between characters.

You did a good job author! Keep it up!