The Hawk and The Flamebound: Breaking Dawn - Reviews

Honestly the best VR novel I have read, and I have read a lot of these. Some key things I’d like to point at that are done well. -The MC uses the knowledge from his reincarnation logicallyOne of the big things that grates on me in other reincarnation novels is the MC not capitalizing on knowing the future markets to make money since it just isn’t logical. This novel on the other hand does a great job. Another great point is how power scaling is done in this novel. Typically novels in this genre will have the MC gaining insane advantages but still having trouble and barley scraping by against a bunch of players. Authors do things like stalling the characters growth or making endless enemies at slightly lower levels, however in this novel the MC faces logical challenges and setbacks. There are no cliche one dimensional characters that just serve to further the word count. The author does a great job making the challenges logical, higher level NPCs, people searching for his location, and a very intricate plot. Probably the best thing about this novel however is the lack of plot holes. I don’t know how the author does it but with a constantly entertaining plot and nothing contradicting 10/10. I will complain however :( the chapters are too short. I’m currently all caught up with privlage chapters at 221 but waiting a week for ~13 chapters and then finishing them in a bit over an hour makes me sad. If you read this review please add a few hundred more words per chapter :) :) :) or maybe even double the length lol :) :)

One Of the best novel that i read, My preferences of novel is one with an op mc,  so this fit's perfect with my preferences,But the storyline kinda repeat itself, you can improve on that :D

20 chapters - read doneSo it's pretty cliche, have bad comedy, op mc, a simple minded(stupid) mc.No harem tag but every girls fall in love with him and will get by his side even if didn't do anything.Conclusion : it's your usual cultivation novels ...... ( still better than the other trash trial read but still bad)

Bad spelling, cringy and the system does everything the mc asks without restrictions or requirements. MC is like a kid...........,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,..................

This is the best book I have ever read so far Mmmmmmmmmmmmm m m m m m m m m mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Another Author Review here. READERS...PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BECAUSE OF THE EARLY CHAPTERS. IF IT FEELS RUSHED TO YOU, PLEASE KEEP ON READING... I AM EDITING MY CHAPTERS ONE BY ONE EACH DAY.. THAT IS ALSO THE REASON WHY MY UPDATES ARE SLOW.THE FUTURE CHAPTER QUALITY HAS ALSO GREATLY INCREASED. SO PLEASE DON'T JUMP THE GUN RIGHT AWAY.I hope you read it till the first volume before making assumptions. Thank you.

The beginning is a bit boring and banal, but over time (quite quickly) it gains depth and evolves like MC.The characters are lively and interesting, the world: the more you learn about it, the more you want to know.The whole novel is very pleasant, the only thing that bothers me a lot is Elisa, I'm not talking about the character but rather about her negative impact on the MC, in my opinion, and I think his titles would agree with me hah.

"Are you daft? I just said that-"

"Uuwi na ako, mali ito. Baka kapag malaman pa ito ni Kiko pati ikaw ay madadamay." Kumalas na ako sa kanya at lumabas na ng pinto.

Hanya dua kata itu yang keluar dari bibirnya dan tidak sanggup memikirkan yang lainnya.

"Master, there's news of suspicious activity," reported a suited man with his head lowered in front of a desk where a man sat, face hidden by the shadows.