The Hawk and The Flamebound: Breaking Dawn - Reviews

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

I don’t like the mc personality, I liked Julius and is one of my favorite characters but I guess it only worked for me as although he has made an impact on the story it was because he wasn’t the main focus of the story unlike the mc who is the main focus as he is the mc. Although I dropped it I recommend reading up to the first arc to see if you like it

All you have to do is edit a little bit.

Everything is perfect ? but .for god's sake, bro just make MC atleast an ordinary boy.why old man? ugly tom? stingy worm brother? ???

Writing quality needs a bit more work, and the story development too, i need to see more to change my mind, other than that love this novel and would highly recommend

I have only read five chapters so far, and it’s excellent intricate relationships between brothers and awesome world building and character development as they combat supernatural creatures Lol Dean totally had a worse start with no memories ? he was just awoke in a dark place facing nightmarish monsters from the start?I'm looking forward to how you tell the story of these two MCs Dean and Xavier im looking forward to getting to know both of them and the crossovers ?Keep it up ???