The General's promise - Reviews

it's not letting me use fast passes for chapter 26???

at the start of the story it says that the life of the mc is tied to the life of the godesses but nobody cares about his life or death this doesnt make sense to me.like there should be people willing to keep him alive so these godesses stay alive

Had a great start! I keep checking back hoping for more chapters only to find cobwebs. Maybe one day, but I think it’s just wishful thinking on my part.                                                                              

This book is one of those, you know killing is wrong but you just can't stop reading it. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for Vaughn to find this elusive gem. I'm glad that this book is already complete so I can binge-read it and won't need to wait for the updates.

This is a great story and very entertaining, I read this when I was frustrated but well this is what I was looking for. ha ha ha ha.Thank you author and continue the story.??

Nice novel, although is isn't the best its still impressive. Love this type of genre, at first I hated the games genre because it was repetitive (check any games novel at the top), however I always liked kingdom building and combining the two genre crated something new I really enjoyed. The humour is a good addition, please continue with it!

Awesome story, gonna binge once the next chappies are out.. What else can I say? The author has great grits to do this novel. The number of chappies out is proof. Keep it up, dear author. May your write more, enjoy more, and learn more!

Out of mind, out of sight?This is messed up

They stood there in silence for a few seconds and then they heard a trumpet sound,, "What's happening?

Seeing his father's expression Alex hurried and hugged his father and not letting him continue his words.

"Mr. Ma said that I have to make sure you have breakfast, "

Anyways,