The General's promise - Reviews

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Wajah Nyonya Zhuo tiba-tiba berubah. "Apa lagi yang Kamu tahu?"

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

"That is Mr. Taylor they are with, he is the coach for the player that play in the back part of the field," Mr. Mohamed added before Charles ran off.

It starts out as smut with idiot MC, and (at chapter 137) ends with a hyper stoic MC that trusts no one. It feels like two different stories. The first couple of chapters it’s about the system he gets and by chapter 100 the system is completely forgotten. The characters are not fleshed out and emotions and deep painful subject matter is handled poorly.

What an amazing story!!?The plot is maintained so well?i am looking forward to your next chapters and the twist and turns?Best of luck author??

i think the title of the webnovel is too long.....