The Fallen Emperor - Reviews

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The story is nice. Writer did a good job in plot and imagenation.Story development is very good. Atleast story don't move at snails pace. that is good for readers like me.Character are designed well. but yes there is still need of some improvement but writer can do that slowly. Chapter updates quite  regularly.Writer did a very good job in world background designing. His imagination is quite good. Story has some flows in terms of grammar . but that can be ignored as it didn't affect me much if the overall all story is good.overall plot is good to give it a try and worthy of attention. minor mistakes can be overlooked as this is writes first book.keep up good work author ?

I'm at chapter 107 and I have to say I'm enjoying the story. Characters are great including the mc, and the pace is fantastic. The games are exciting as well and I find myself feeling similar to how I would feel watching a live match. Which is quite impressive on the authors part as this could make or break the story. Thankfully it was done well. 5/5.

looking forward to reading it the synopsis seems good

Writing quality, could use a simple spellchecker like Grammarly, it would take it a notch higher, Updates, seems stable,The story is rapidly changing every chapter, it's always on the move.As for character design, I personally would like more dialogue and inner thoughts.Background is great.

'Hm...neat. Show me the buffs, still.'

Nakatapos na silang maghapunan nang dumating sina Paulo at Brian. Si Jenica na ang nag-asikaso sa dalawa na naghain at si Brian naman ang nagligpit ng kinainan nila.

Gardner, John. The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers. New York: Vintage, 1991.

[For having AGI over 20, you have gained the Perk [Fleet-foot]]

Everyone's welcome!  How I wish I could just write...day after day.  Someday... This dream of mine would come true and I hope that you all stay and follow me in my journey.???

His intuition told him to follow her.

i already exhausted with this loneliness but nothing can't change the situation.