The Fallen Emperor - Reviews

I could use a little fuel myself

when she woke up she felt somthing warm and cuddly beside her and instinctively her body got closer to it and slowly fell asleep without her permission. A few days had past with her drinking milk, sleeping, and daily stretches. It was a very frustating few days for her since she wasn't in control when it came to feeding and sleeping her body only allowed her to do her weird stretches during the time it gave which wasn't alot. When she was finally able to open her eyes she cried tears of joy since, in seeing she was also able to be in control of her body. She was also excited to see what species she had become as well as have a better sense of how her mother looked since it is never too late to form a mother daughter bond. For the first time opening her eyes all she saw was the darkness of her species specialty made tunnel but soon after her eyes adjusted to it, she was able to see that the older family members were surrounding herself and the litter of furless newborns giving them warmth. She wondered if she was safe there since none were awake or on guard and danger waits for no one. But she ignored the thought in favor of looking around more.

"I'm not, but she's quite important. She has potential, plus she seems to be truly devoted to me and....You, for some reasons i can't explain, since she shouldn't be aware of your existence. By the way, why are you playing with your flames like that ? Contemplating what atrocities you can commit with it ?" Asked Zeref, he was actually wondering why Natsu was so mesmerized by the flames, which showed on his current expression.

Keep up the good work! You've done a good job with the series; I see lots of protentional and tons more story to be told with this.  Obviously, it has roots with other works like Cote, and Tomodachi Games, but this feels like a whole different beast on its own. I definitely recommend this to others to read if they want a brand new experience in terms of smart MCs.

I loved it. Nice and short straight to the point and no messing around with the story

I rate this story five stars because it deserves to be rated that way. It has interesting concepts of a power system which is unique and new. The cultural addition to the story too piqued my interest. It is well woven into the story making a well defined narrative. I will check this story from time to time and add it in my collection. Thank you for introducing your story to me. It is a good read!

First chapter read, good concept and execution. Hoping for this series to thrive!

A swift romance novel here. The characters are fleshed out properly and the story has a great sense of hooking there.  I love it. It is a great piece of art.