The Elemental system - Reviews

one of the best cultivation Rpg I have read so far. But the chapters are short fot reading and while Iam reading they complete too fast because it's short chapters,Author please increase the chapter length

This website shoud had some restrict to make peopel post a review just after reading some chapter of the novel.. because i read comment's before i read any novel and i'm seeing some peopel saying their thoughts that this novel "looks like" and they review it with 1 start... Kids a review is something you do after actualy read the novel not something that you just read the Synopsis and the tag martial art and make a review without reading the novel and saying that --->"looks like a generic martial art like all the other one i read before" and when i'm read they Reading Status is actualy 0 so they didn't read the novel and they can evaluate the novel.. So just saying perhaps is bether to enable reviewing with a reading status at least on a 30 40 chapters.. so they can actualy review the novel properly

well I must say this is a unique story, a dead hunting a living.but what I noticed emmy is that u write almost like I do when I describe a scene or an appearance.well everyone should give ur book a chance, even though u locked ur chapters early enough ???

Pretty niche novel with lots of plot hole/unexplained progression. At one point MC got a 300x bonus on one year which meant he got 300 years worth of cultivation but only leveled up 5 levels in Xiantian which is the 2nd cultivation stage which made no sense

Is this novel still gonna get translation? Or is it dropped? Why is this happening                                                              

Author's "Top star" is one of the best one out there but this one is a complete disappointment, nothing in this clicks, even characters, story and the world-building, everything is bland.Sorry author but your last one was so good that this one is too average

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Personally, I think this is a lovely ML book. The chapters have substantial length and we are clear about who our MC is from the very beginning. While I feel that there needs to be more setting built to give us more of an idea of what happened to his surroundings as well as how he got into his position in the first place, it doesn't interrupt the flow of the book. There's only one major flaw and it's the lack of full-stops, though it doesn't impact the flow of reading since the paragraphing makes up for it. I'm looking forward to more from this book, keep writing!

Ling Tian opened his eyes as his mind trembled.

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"What do you mean?"