The Elemental system - Reviews

Huhu! Nawawalan na ako ng pag asa. It seem like were not destined to each other talaga.

  Duduk santai disamping Shindong yang tengah serius menyetir. Kegiatannya pada hari itu memang sangat padat, tapi tidak selelah ketika ia bertanding. Lagi pula ia hanya perlu berpose sesuai arahan photographer. Selama perjalanan mereka menuju apartemennya, Sehun mengisi waktunya dengan mengamati foto-foto Sora yang terdapat di dalam ponselnya. Senyuman pun mengiringi perjalanannya.

The explosive strength trembled Atlas's quivering arms. He felt like a giant, like a demon monster, unstoppable and ready to squash and exterminate anyone.

This novel was awfully written. The characters' interaction with one another  feels fake, and the fight scene is just terrible and brain-dead.

Very good that you keep writing since beginning and never stop. I like the fact its mysterious type. Well done Author for so much hard work.

???keep writing so that it can develop into  a good one. Need to check other female oriented to see how this one. Will give review once again after checking all. For now this is okay.

It's a good book. Keep up the good work author