The Billionaire's Betrayal - Reviews

There is a few spelling error here and there, only a few though, but it's still fun to read.Like the fact that it is kinda realistic and not like some other novel where 'the team is currently losing a game and the mc gog in and turn the game around', none of that BSI would say the mc have a good mentality, a little bit hot headed sometimes, but for good reason. Also love the fact that the mc is not overconfident or arrogant.Love the fact that you didn't make the other ignore and insolate the mc because he made it into the first team even though being so young.I like that the mc is becoming friend with everyone in the team, because football is a team game, it doesn't matter if your the best striker or the best defender you can't win the game alone.

I've got one word for this novel. WOW.seriously, how hasn't this novel topped the charts yet? I personally love the book,and think it's a masterpiece.I wouldn't be surprised if it tops all the original novels on this site. The one thing that would suck is that if it goes on hiatus (no more chapters) I would be really sad because this story rocks

I love baseball stories. This is one of my favorites. Usually would leave longer and more detailed review but I don’t want to spoil anything. Just read it and that’s telling enough. 10/10. Also author give me more chapters.

Hello Everyone, It's me who wrote this :p .. well please leave your suggestions for my novel. Since it's my first one.  Thank you and enjoy

Just from the synop, I know this is a great story and the creator is one of the prominent ones known in this place.It's a good one, and those seeking real fun and genuine reading thrill would definitely looooove it~

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amazing character development love the new abilities and the chance that more will come into the future. this novel has so much potential, love it!

very novel please update it a little faster. I hope the story can be slowed down a little. please make him do business also. for example, he could buy under armor

This was a good read that I enjoyed till the end.  I recommend it to anyone looking for short stories with a bit of mystery. This book contains two stories that are linked to kne another ?Authors writing was good with good character development ? It portrays highly of love, anguish and familial bond. It contains slight gore and mild disturbing elements but nothing too heavy. While it was heartwarming to watch Alexandra and Silverstein's journey of love and existence it was equally enjoyable to see Cleo's persistence in winning her love ??As much as I enjoyed reading this book which have a proper ending with happiness for all, there were certain parts that I feel were neglected. There's the part where Herrera and Samuel wanted to stop the Crown Prince's wedding but they made no effort in posing a challenge for them. For all I know, these two were not necessary as they had no role in the story. Jeremy and Selina's liaison wasn't concluded. There's no mention of their relationship after the Crown Prince's wedding and I truly hope some additional chapters are written to give an ending to these two. Alexandra's parents were mentioned to be Vampires at the end which made no sense also the reason for Alexandra's impeccable hearing was not mentioned.Overall I enjoyed the book thoroughly despite the shortcomings as they wouldn't affect the flow of the main story ? There's potential for certain spin offs for the pairs Seline-Jeremy and Estelle-Ryanair ? I'm thankful to the author for writing this piece that entertained me to the entirety of it ????

"Silly girl, there's Nian Gao and the others to keep you company. Be good now alright?"

"And Hiruzen although I love just chatting like this I have a few items on my agenda. First is to ensure the safety of the Pack from the Jonin instructors present as I do have plans to recruit you students."

Mobil itu parkir tepat disamping mobil Nella dan teman temannya parkir.  Lamborghini berwarna merah terparkir menawan di ikuti teriakan histeris dari wanita wanita yang berada di sekitar tempat parkir.. "aaaaaaaaa..  akhirnya dia selesai cuti kuliahnya..  bahagia banget aku bisa lihat dia walau dari jauhhh..  aaaaaaahhhh" sahut salah seorang gadis yang ikut berlari mendekat untuk melihat seseorang yang masih didalam mobil yang baru saja datang. Perlahan pintu mobil itu terbuka,  seorang laki laki tampan,  bukan hanya tampan tapi benar benar mempesona, keluar dengan dingin dari mobil tanpa memperdulikan suara berisik yang memanggil manggil namanya.  "Erdennn...  ahhhhhhh Erdenn... pleasee lihat akuu..." teriak lantang seorang gadis yang histeris melihat ketampanan Erden .  Erden adalah mahasiswa tingkat akhir jurusan kedokteran, dia sudah 2 bulan cuti karena mengurus urusan bisnis keluarganya karena ayahnya sakit.  Erden bisa dikatakan mahasiswa TOP di kampus,  karena ketampanannya dan juga kekayaannya membuatnya terkenal di seantero kampus.  Erden berjalan di depan Nella dan genknya.